Falling to pieces 2

[december_star]

Fandom : Saint Seiya
Notes : This is turning out longer than I had expected when I started writing this. As usual, I know where this is going, more or less, but the road to it is a bit unclear still.

Comments

[scorpioyue]

Oooh, I finally could read it! I liked it very much! It kept me interested till the end and I like how it sounds like a horror tale. *beams in joy* More important, I like this more mature version of Hyoga. And since my fic has a tiny Camus - Hyoga interaction, it helps me too. ^^

Also liked the way Hyoga thinks of Freya. I don't like her, hehehe. >:D

He would have thought that the death of a loved one would have made her grow up but on the contrary, it seemed to have kept her in place, exactly the same as she was before, but with more resentment and anger.

I can't wait for part 3! :D

[torquemadman]

Ooooh, creepy dead people started to appear! And they're not friendly and prone to mock...lovely. :)~ I, too, like how it is turning into horror tale. More horrrrrror upon Hyoga in the following chapters, please? :->

[ghaidin]

“You really think this is only a dream? Wake up already!”

Niiiice sentence! From my point of view it captures a whole lot of the story. And all those nice details made a really vivid picture in my mind.
I'm very much intrigued about what's in store for Hyoga.