Comments | debbiel66: Housefic: This Heart Thing

debbiel66

Housefic: This Heart Thing

Nov 22, 2008 20:20

Title: This Heart Thing ( Read more... )

Comments 69

specialsmiley November 23 2008, 06:48:07 UTC

This is really wonderful. I could see the show addressing something like this with Wilson further down the line. They both are in perfect voice.

Love this: Amber’s death was the worst thing that had ever happened to him, but it wasn’t the worst thing that could happen.

Wilson's anxiety not just based on his past but on his fears for reliving it in the future.

Well Done.

debbiel66 November 23 2008, 07:10:46 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback - what I would give to see ongoing treatment of Wilson's Heart on the show. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story - thanks so much for letting me know.

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debbiel66 November 23 2008, 14:45:48 UTC

Thanks so much for reading.

hwshipper November 23 2008, 11:10:10 UTC

That was beautiful, sad but lovely too. And H&W dialogue completely believable and IC. Thank-you!

debbiel66 November 23 2008, 14:46:43 UTC

Thank you so much! A lot more dialogue in this one than I've dared before, so I really appreciate the IC feedback. Thanks so much for reading.

menolly_au November 23 2008, 11:11:10 UTC

Great story, beautifully written. Love them both in this. So glad we have fan fiction to fill in the gaps the show leaves. Thank you :)

debbiel66 November 23 2008, 14:49:40 UTC

Thank you so much! I don't think I could never get enough post-Amber House and Wilson moments, so I seem to keep creating more and more of them. I'm still hoping there's more filling in from the show as well. Thanks for reading and commenting!

bukabe16 November 23 2008, 11:58:43 UTC

Beautiful. Really, I liked the way House was watching out for Wilson, makes my fan-girl heart sing :)

Have you heard that Norwegian guy's version of Hallelujah? It's awesome! Talented but a little bit ugly, I agree^^
*runs off to listen to the song on youtube*

debbiel66 November 23 2008, 14:52:13 UTC

I am admittedly addicted to stories where House looks out for Wilson - hopefully, I'm working them out of my system because I think I'll wear out that theme's welcome before too long!

And I have to go listen. I admit this was based on an exchange between my teenage son and husband that I thought was funny. Off to google! (And thinking for the first time, oh no - I called a real person ugly!)

Thanks for reading.

Debbie