Remission

Sep 19, 2011 16:05

Title: Remission
Author: debbiel66
Characters: Dean, Sam, Castiel
Word Count: 3500
Genre: gen; h/c; broken!Sam, hurt!Dean
Rating: R (language)
Warnings: Spoilers through Season 6; AU from that point on.
Author's Notes: Huge grateful thank you to the lovely and talented callistosh65 for the beta read.

Summary: The demon voices in his head were so hard to resist… ( Read more... )

fic, supernatural

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harrigan September 19 2011, 23:22:00 UTC
That ending! ♥ ♥ ♥

Is it Friday yet?

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debbiel66 September 19 2011, 23:26:00 UTC
I KNOW! I've been meaning to write this all summer but only just now got it finished.

Cannot wait.

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ash48 September 20 2011, 00:12:48 UTC
Oh wow. Wow. Yes.

Oh hun. This feels so right. As if this could actually happen. Just like this.

Sam's head should be a complete mess and he will have to struggle to stay in the here and now and it will be Dean who will get him through it.

Perfect.

The taint in his soul was like a drop of ink in a glass of water. It would never be clear again.

Beautiful description. I only ever thought about his soul being back and it will be the same. But of course it won't. It will forever carry the marks of hell.

And Sam getting drunk on the idea of beer. LOLZ! That is SO Sam like.

Loved it to pieces.
xx

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debbiel66 September 20 2011, 00:53:31 UTC
Yay, thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked it. I've been meaning to write this all summer and just ran out of time, thank goodness!

Cannot wait for Friday, and I'm just so glad you posted it. &hearts

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sidhe_arien September 20 2011, 00:14:50 UTC
This hurt to read! *smishes*

Needless to say, I loved it. :)

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debbiel66 September 20 2011, 00:53:49 UTC
Aw, thanks. So glad you enjoyed it. :)

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borgmama1of5 September 20 2011, 01:36:35 UTC
Devastating.

And amazingly written to keep me hanging on every sentence!

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debbiel66 September 20 2011, 01:52:09 UTC
Thanks so much...glad you liked it and oh so glad to have our new ep on its way. :-)

Thanks so much for commenting!

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sandymg September 20 2011, 02:25:29 UTC
Whoa. Visceral. This is what I see. Sam broken. Dean determined. You peg them so right.

This: The demon voices in his head were so hard to resist…they whispered he was damned and doomed and as good as dead. They crooned to him that all hope was lost. Sam was tired, so very tired, but Dean needed him. And Sam was still his father’s son.

Dean gave him a stern little shake. “Sam. You with me?”

“I’m here,” Sam said and meant it. He stood up a little straighter and looked Dean in the eyes. “I am. I really am.”

--- Just perfect. His father's son. Exactly so.

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debbiel66 September 20 2011, 02:51:27 UTC
Oh, thank you so much. I'm just thrilled you liked it. &hearts

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