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Jul 09, 2010 01:06

Pairing: Jeff/Annie, Britta/Everyone, ensemble
Word Count: 6209
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for language
Spoilers: Season One
Description: Graduation 2013, complete with flashbacks to the past four years.
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community owns me.

Author’s Note: Fic Exchange Gift for rashaka  (Prompt: kissing ( Read more... )

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thebadunkadunk July 10 2010, 10:43:54 UTC
A.Mazing.

I honestly hope you write more because it was awesome. Just epic and brilliant.

Also nice shoutout to Rancho Cucamonga, I went to college near there

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dearygirl July 14 2010, 04:52:10 UTC
Thank you so much!

I will definitely be writing more for Annie and Jeff. They are two completely compelling characters that I love writing. And I've sooooorta toyed with writing a companion piece to this from Britta's point of view. But we'll see.

The Rancho Cucamonga shoutout was actually in reference to something Ken Jeong did which I explain a little bit in a reply a few comments up from yours.

Thank you SO much for reading and commenting!

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dearygirl July 14 2010, 04:56:14 UTC
THANK YOU! Oh I'm so glad you liked it.

Abed is a fun character to write because he's weirdly complex and you can take him to a really meta place but also to a really sweet place and I love that. And I'm really glad you liked the ensemble stuff. That always makes me the most nervous to write because I have a hard time with Troy and Pierce. The fact that I made you laugh makes me a little ridiculously happy.

Seriously thank you for reading a commenting. It means more than I can say.

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1epic_love July 10 2010, 20:11:52 UTC
I ... no words. This was just pure perfection *dies*

I would love to list all my favourite parts, but the whole thing was my favourite part so... :)

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dearygirl July 14 2010, 04:56:50 UTC
Thank you SO much for reading and leaving such a sweet comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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firthgal July 11 2010, 04:49:14 UTC
Oh gosh, this... gaaaah, this was so, so wonderful! I loved everything about it. The format made it flow and progress so perfectly, and you've created so many beautiful moments that build their friendship so convincingly to the point where calling/texting each other is like breathing, and all the while they seem to have this vibe that in their subconscious they are sort of waiting for each other, and that was simply brilliant. And to end with the explanation of what happened after the kiss at the tranny dance was genius. And their moments of realization about loving each other were so utterly perfect. And the ensemble bits were spot-on, especially Britta. In short, this fic was awesome.

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dearygirl July 14 2010, 05:00:19 UTC
THANK YOU!

I'll admit, I'm a huge fan of writing the progression of a relationship and how two people come together. Annie and Jeff already have such an interesting dynamic that it's so much fun to play with. And I'm glad you liked Britta. She's slowly become one of my favorite characters.

Thank you again for reading and commenting. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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under_crisis July 11 2010, 16:03:00 UTC
I don't know what else to say that the others haven't said. I don't even know what particular part I liked more, because it all completely gelled and it's like a perfect duet or great seeee ( ... )

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dearygirl July 14 2010, 05:08:02 UTC
Thank you for this amazingly awesome comment.

I just love these characters so much, ridiculously so, and I really just try to stay true to that. So receiving a comment like this gives me the warm fuzzies in a serious way.

I'm really glad you liked Britta. She's a really interesting character to write because I feel like we don't know very much about her yet on the show but what we do know if totally compelling. And I don't see her acting in a catty way toward Annie or letting this destroy their friendship but at the same time I do think Jeff's relationship means something to her and that's something she has to process.

And I'm so happy you liked the finale kiss being at the end. I was worried that it wouldn't work and I'm so glad that it did.

Thank you again for commenting and reading and leaving such an awesome response. Truly.

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