merlin | drabble + double drabble | g, gen

Jan 06, 2011 14:28

bright and bold - G - Merlin - 100 words
They are rebuilding Camelot, beginning anew.
For the merlin100 prompt "beginnings."

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character: merlin, character: gaius, -merlin100, fandom: merlin

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starrylizard January 6 2011, 20:53:19 UTC
Both lovely! :D

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plumora January 6 2011, 22:16:04 UTC
Thank you. :)

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bananahater336 January 6 2011, 21:04:54 UTC
The first one is so terribly beautiful. I love the simplicity of it, what's left unsaid and for the reader to decide, that Camelot has fallen and that they need to find ways to start again, and even such a small thing as growing grass is a huge step toward renewed life, and - it's just lovely. <3

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plumora January 6 2011, 22:18:11 UTC
Ah, thanks! I had this idea in my mind that I wanted to get across but 100 words was so little for that idea, so I'm glad it's answered enough questions while still leaving the entire story up to the reader to mull over. :)

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archaeologist_d January 6 2011, 21:28:04 UTC
Both are lovely. I really liked how you repeated words in the second one for emphasis. Well done.

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plumora January 6 2011, 22:18:44 UTC
Thank you. :)

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mostly_a_reader January 11 2011, 15:21:51 UTC
Oh, I loved both of these little drabbles. You conveyed so much with so little words. Great job! Thank you very much :)

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plumora January 11 2011, 23:36:59 UTC
c: Thank you!

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arobynsung January 13 2011, 02:09:41 UTC
These are both lovely!

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plumora January 13 2011, 02:54:18 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed them. :)

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