BABY! PLEASE LOOK AT ME - 1/2

[deadlyscarlet]

Title: Baby! Please, Look at me
Chapter: 1/2
Author: deadlyscarlet
Beta: N/A
Genre: AU/ Romance/ Slight Fluff/ Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Mention of Death, Suicide Attempt, Oral, Sex
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha[Main], Aoi/OC[Betrayal], OC/Uruha[Betrayal]
Band: the GazettE
Characters: Aoi, Uruha, Kai, OCs

Synopsis: Aoi who had been betrayed by his long

Comments

[dontfallthrough]

First?
Well anyway, this was so besutiful! Just as beautiful as it was sad and depressing. But I grow bored of only cheap happines, so I really liked this.
The way you write Aoi's feelings are so authentic and I reall feel all of his emotions.
Poor Aoi, keep getting hurt all the time, and not even Kai (the brightest sunshine in the universe) can help him.
And I feel so bad for Uruha. He doesn't deserve any of it, but what can you do.
And I like your new style, not that I disliked the old one, but news things are always welcome^^
I'm definetly looking forward to the continuation:)

[deadlyscarlet]

Thank u for reading and commenting ^^
I am glad u like this..I was so nervous LOL as this exploration of unknown territory..
Aw I m so happy u cud actually feel Aoi's emotions as that was exactly wat I wanted...poor thing always heartbroken..
And yes Uruha doesnt know anything abt Aoi's feelings so he cant be blamed..
I will try writing the continuation when I can..I seriously have so many things to update LOL

[toesjah]

Why is everyone so cruel today?! T___T

I already read two sad stories today, why do you have to make me cry again? xD

This was so emotional o.o poor Aoi and Uruha x__x it really is sad.. I hope it will turn out all lovey dovey in the last chapter hehe.

Soo if you excuse me now, im going to cry my eyes out and bawl like a little child xD

[deadlyscarlet]

Aw I know wat u mean..even I read three cruel stories and was wondering if I should post this..but well I wont have another opportunity so :(

Yes the story will have a happy ending so dont worry *wipes ur tears*

Sweetie, I am so sorry *hugs u* even I did cry whenever I was reading this again and again for editing which is really rare as I never cry for my stuff LOL

[toesjah]

Lolol Wanna cry together? xD

-Huggles-

[deadlyscarlet]

*sniffle* okay

[viciousfaye69]

Great fic. It's beautifully written. I honestly could feel Aoi's desperation and need for Uruha's love. I'm really looking forward to the sequel when ever you get to it. This is going in my faves. BTW Happy Birthday^^

[deadlyscarlet]

Thank u ^^ This is a new style I experimented on.
I am glad you could feel Aoi's desperation as that what I was planning for ^^
Aw my birthday is on the 15th but thank u as this is the first b'day wish ^_^
thanx for commenting

[anknick]

Oh my... Thanks for the hope that he will be saved *gets off the floor after fainting* XD
I dunno what else to say.. at times I thought Aoi being shy is a curse for him lol
I dunno why would you be scared to post this.. Be like me who posts all the rubbish that i can XDDD
btw.. when's your birthday? *w*

[deadlyscarlet]

tat suicide attempt wasn't there in the original outline..but well i have been terribly depressed and so i added it (_ _)
ya i knw but the poor thing was just scared..u knw he was in a relationship for three long years and the bitch just had to tear his heart apart *hugs Aoi kitty*
XD I guess I am a timid person by nature LOL WHICH IS SO NOT TRUE
The great day DIM album was released JULY 15 ^^

[anknick]

Ikr.. how suicide comes into whatever you;re writing if you're depressed.. it happened to me too lol
Yeah.. i understand..but Uruha did scream Aoi when he came *wiggles eyebrows*
I feel extremely high now for some reason.. O.o My brain is malfunctioning XDDD Maybe cuz its late idk >__>
Annnnnd.. I'll try to gift you something Aoiha on your bday! I hope i keep my promise because am lazy as hell.. XD

[deadlyscarlet]

Ya i knw rite..But well it is kinda essential for the next chapter so I thot of adding it :)
Oh ya Uruha couldn't resist Aoi's delicious lips around his AKDHSKFLSDG :D I mean who could??? *Dares u to say otherwise*
U better don't be lazy or i m gonna kill u..I am kidding XD but anything Aoiha is always welcome and gosh I seriously love birthday presents XD so even if not on my b'day at least on a later day okay *puppy eyes*

[deadlyscarlet]

My birthday is on the 15th but thank u sweet heart ^^ and i m glad u um liked the present XD