worry naught; song challenge 13: light sleeper

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[title] worry naught
[pairing] a lil' bit of hosu; Yunho-centric
[genre] uh, general?
[rating] g
[summary] he never seems to sleep
[a/n] :3 It's been a while since I've written, even longer since I've posted here. So yupp, I don't think the piece is too angsty; concrit is ♥~

Comments

[foldingcrane]

Whee~ you are so fast!

Gosh, I haven't posted a single entry after the fic! ;___;

[angelicbuttons]

HAHAHA, as I've told you, effect required to crop bases < effort needed to icon

[arrowlights]

MINE.

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oh, yunho. yunho, i feel for him in this fic ;A; *squishes him*

and hosu, ♥

[angelicbuttons]

O.o still squish Ho?

oh, yesterday's log - is there a need to "complete it"?

[angelicbuttons]

&hearts hahaha, thanks~

[quiet_heartache]

loves the hosu

but sorry, umma interferes...: His hand reaches out to pull Junsu close, murmuring quietly into the mess of hair, “You do I love you, don’t you?” - i like this bit lol, but is iy 'you know' rather than 'you do'...?

thankies

[angelicbuttons]

oops, should have been "you do know" D8

&hearts

[kizunehikari]

the beginning starts off a little choppy but the fic soon flows smoothly.
"Yunho thinks no one knows, believes no one sees his silent anguish, hopes no one's aware that he never does the same." i like the way you put thinks/believes/hope tgt, but the presentation is pretty awkward ><

loved how you mixed yunho's thoughts, feelings and reality

and yes! the hosu is rrly sweet :) and in character too! :)

[angelicbuttons]

^^ I'll keep that in mind should I write again, thank you!