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Response for Drabble Challenge 1: Beginnings

Feb 12, 2008 20:05

Title: First Kiss
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jaemint February 13 2008, 08:09:51 UTC

...his heart skipping a beat as the sheep boy enveloped the tall deer in his arms to feel Changmin’s warmth.

*squeeeeeeeeee*

Yay! You're using my icon, too! *chuus wifey*

junsu_hyung February 14 2008, 14:51:00 UTC

*glomps and chus*

Aws! Thanks, babe!

onew February 13 2008, 11:38:50 UTC

still melts my heart. :D great job. :D

junsu_hyung February 15 2008, 02:38:46 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

kallistei February 13 2008, 14:08:03 UTC

The tenses work much better in this version, good job. But now it's not technically a drabble any more.

junsu_hyung February 15 2008, 02:38:24 UTC

Oh sads... TT__TT