a smile for the tears (open challenge: i miss my sky, let dai)

Aug 12, 2010 20:13

a smile for the tears
yoochun + junsu
pg-13
901 words
concrit, please.
[yoochun and junsu visit the rooftop at school.]

you will never be alone )

c: open challenge, c: let dai, a: sarangmode, c: i miss my sky

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sarangmode August 14 2010, 20:53:38 UTC
"... wild imagination as escapism ..."
that's exactly it.

thank you for reading and commenting :D

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aleen94 August 13 2010, 17:17:42 UTC
poor chunnie!!!
luckily junsu was there to comfort him..
really like their mission scene!!!
love it and thanks for sharing!!

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sarangmode August 14 2010, 20:54:23 UTC
thank you :)

the 'mission' bit was a whim of mine ;)
i'm glad you liked it.

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sarangmode August 23 2010, 15:58:45 UTC
thank you so much for the concrit. getting true concrit is rare and i really appreciate it.

thank you also for reading and commenting :)

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keiko_kirin August 24 2010, 00:15:54 UTC
How it slowly spins from childlike, secretive play to something very serious is excellent. This: and for junsu, it feels as if yoochun hugs, not only with his arms, but his whole body and heart was perfect! Beautiful.

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sarangmode August 24 2010, 01:50:10 UTC
thank you! there are sometimes where i want to run away from things...and i wondered how yoochun would be if he did so as well. :)

thanks for the comment and reading! XD

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