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No Turning Back (drabble challenge 99: freefall)

Jul 19, 2010 18:03

title: No Turning Back
author: keiko_kirin
word count: 100
concrit: sure
pairing: YooSu
rating: PG
summary: Junsu steps closer to the edge.

( No Turning Back )

c: freefall, a: keiko_kirin

Comments 8

only4dbsk July 20 2010, 01:40:27 UTC

OMG ♥♥♥♥
LOVE.

keiko_kirin July 26 2010, 13:40:06 UTC

Thank you! ^__^

underthepines July 20 2010, 02:27:43 UTC

Lips as a canyon. That is an absolutely amazing metaphor.
This was wonderful. <3

keiko_kirin July 26 2010, 13:40:19 UTC

^__^ thank you!

afruz July 20 2010, 10:39:31 UTC

A tension and a curiosity are built up wonderfully with the simple opening lines.

keiko_kirin July 26 2010, 13:40:52 UTC

Thank you! ^__^

yummy_dreams August 8 2010, 12:33:31 UTC

Love the metaphor and use of the word canyon. Somehow this drabble is beautiful, and memorable and very poetic as well.

keiko_kirin August 10 2010, 06:23:48 UTC

Thank you! :)