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there’s power in your fingertips (flashfic challenge 3: wishbone)

Mar 15, 2008 16:09

title: (remix) there’s power in your fingertips
author: ouimonsieur
word count: 2,650
concrit?: sure.
pairing: yunho/changmin/junsu
rating: R. read at your own discretion.
summary: we are terrible for each other, and, yes, we are a disaster // but tell me your heart doesn't race for a hurricane or a burning building // i'd rather die terrified than live ( Read more... )

c: wishbone, a: ouimonsieur

Comments 39

kallistei March 15 2008, 23:23:31 UTC

...
I promised I wouldn't kill you, so I won't. But I am taking my mojo back now.

ouimonsieur March 16 2008, 03:53:19 UTC

*gives him back, along with cookies* the cookies are for him, btw, not you. :-*

kallistei March 16 2008, 08:37:11 UTC

:( But I need cookies now. *flails*

ouimonsieur March 16 2008, 21:43:20 UTC

no you don't. D: EMBRACE THE ROMANCE.

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applesu March 15 2008, 23:54:29 UTC

i- i... wow, nhaca. cries. flails a lot atchu. this is fantastic. so well done! i am incoherent with the love ♥ brilliant characters.

ouimonsieur March 16 2008, 04:06:43 UTC

aww, sazz! *dances around the room with you~* :-* thank you so much bb.

thevirginia March 16 2008, 00:16:21 UTC

omg *waves to junsu* byebye shiny!su. ;_____;
damn you, woman. and su cuddled with min while studying. and and and. :{

ouimonsieur March 16 2008, 04:07:15 UTC

junsu: *waves back* ;;

su cuddling and doing NOTHING while min studies is possibly the most precious thing in the world ... :(

oldwillow_brook March 16 2008, 03:31:01 UTC

Holy Shit.

Amazing.

My heart is unsure who to feel bad for.

Yunho for being lonely.

Changmin for now having to suffer.

or Junsu whom is now DEAD!

Really what a fantastic job.

There is only a little thing I have to mention.
I was really confused on who was who. Until you started using names.
The first two parts, I didn't know who you actually was.

But otherwise, it was GREAT!

ouimonsieur March 16 2008, 04:10:22 UTC

thank you! :) i'm not quite sure who i feel sorry for, either. all of them, really. :(

second person pov is a vice, and one that i cannot shake off no matter how hard i try. it's quite usual for a reader not to know who "you" and "he" is until a bit into the story. sorry for any confusion!

♥

hoyah March 16 2008, 04:25:18 UTC

fdalfdjlsajdf! nhaca! wtf! ;_; you make my heart bleed

ouimonsieur March 16 2008, 05:11:05 UTC

*bandages it* m'sry bb, i did not mean to!