there’s power in your fingertips (flashfic challenge 3: wishbone)

[ouimonsieur]

title: (remix) there’s power in your fingertips
author: ouimonsieur
word count: 2,650
concrit?: sure.
pairing: yunho/changmin/junsu
rating: R. read at your own discretion.
summary: we are terrible for each other, and, yes, we are a disaster // but tell me your heart doesn't race for a hurricane or a burning building // i'd rather die terrified than live

Comments

[_happy_as_rain_]

It's interesting that you took out Changmin's attraction to Yunho & his own suicide from this fic. Personally I like this version much better. Minimalistic and very detached. It makes for very memorable reading.

[ouimonsieur]

ot: your icon is beautiful!
i mentioned changmin's attraction to yunho only in passing (the part where he comes with the thought of yunho's dark eyes). it was very detached and i'm glad you noted it - it was hard writing such a plot as this without adding the melodrama. another reason why i left our changmin's suicide. ♥

[ouimonsieur]

minsu ♥ thank you so much! i'm flattered. :)

[hyungie]

i missed the first one and was clueless to what you were referring to. FAIL!! but yes, this version is better altho killing junsu will not be forgiven YOU MEAN WOMAN. *wipes tears* AND I REALLY LOVE THE SEQUIN BAG!!!!!!!!!

and and and i like the first ending? =)

minsu is really getting to my head these days. too cute!!!!

ILU, BB. this was really good! *gives loves*

[ouimonsieur]

ah, that's okay. i wrote it a LONGGGG time ago. though i had hoped that people would forgive me for the junsu!death ... i'm glad i didn't hold my breath. ;)

flamboyant!su with wavy blond hair and colorful skirts makes me happy in strange, strange ways. 8) the sequined bag goes along with that character.

:-* *loves back* pls2love the minsu. they are the ship i turn to when the jaeho muse leaves me.

[kurogoma]

gahh!!! you made my heart bled the first time, and you are making it bleed AGAINNNNN!!!!!!!!! >___<

i half-hoped starting the fic that maybe, just maybe in the remix junsu didn't jump and changmin would not off himself.

but, le sigh....still beautifully haunting though. and yunho is just...sad.

the original was one of my favorites. ^^

[ouimonsieur]

*gives many, many bandaids* ;;

well, changmin technically did not off himself in this version! \o/ ...but yeah, you're allowed to hit me if you want.

♥ thank you so much! i actually noticed that you liked the original on that one ficmeme, so i'm glad you liked the remix as well! ♥

[314159]

skflajadj great, just what i need when i come back from a night of drunkenness D: *kicked* this was heartbreaking. stupid yunho and his asshattery due to his lack of jaejoong. :( sigh.

[ouimonsieur]

................DIES i should write a sequel where it's ~REVEALED~ that yunho is an asshole because of teh lack of teh jaejoong!!!!1111 ;))

[314159]

LOL. BEST SEQUEL EVER. omg poor susu is dead and min is traumatized but THERE IS JAEHO and all is good in the world!!!!