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dazeyhaze

Fanfic: The Greatest Enemy [2/?]

Sep 05, 2007 12:36

Title: The Greastest Enemy [2/?]
Rating: PG-13
Genre: General
Pairing: Sasu/Naru
Summary: Being the Fourth Hokage meant he had many enemies. So who did he consider his greatest enemy?
Warnings: Over-protective father. There may also be a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me. No copyright infringement is ( Read more... )

fic: greatest enemy, naruto fic, naruto

Comments 17

hinshihoushi September 5 2007, 03:48:50 UTC

Absolutely fantastic. Not sure which chapter I like best and I am soooo happy that you continued this. I have read the 1st chapter many times over the past year hoping and here you are.

I about died when he explained how to play cat and dog, but that was nothing compared to the pet kitty.

I really hope you keep this up, because it really is one of my favorites and considering how much I read that is saying a lot.

dazeyhaze September 5 2007, 09:17:14 UTC

Hee, thank you :)

I'm glad you liked this.

chibidraco September 5 2007, 13:05:39 UTC

Hormones or not, Little Sasuke is a pervert in training
This is too adorable for words and I love their "good bye" kiss ritual

dazeyhaze September 5 2007, 14:05:37 UTC

Thank you :)

calambmity September 6 2007, 09:47:08 UTC

“Naru will be Hokie, just like daddy.”
*guffaws*
It's like 11 at night I'm reading this, bad idea because this made me laugh the entire time.
“Don’t you want to be a good ninja? What happened to your dream of becoming a good ninja? Why don’t you want to be a good ninja anymore? Why? Why Naruto? Why?” <--- Poor Minato was losing it, with all of his 'why's

Sasuke = pervert...expert pervert. ;D
The boy's got skills at his age.

Love this story, thanks so much for continuing!

♥ calambmity

dazeyhaze September 9 2007, 03:01:41 UTC

Thank you for reading this and taking the time to comment. I'm really glad that you liked this. Sasuke sure is an expert pervert, for his age anyway.

calambmity September 10 2007, 21:01:05 UTC

Glory to young perverts. XDDDDD

wardrum September 9 2007, 17:02:10 UTC

...this is absolutely brilliant. I love it. XD lovelovelove♥ it.

I can't wait for more~

dazeyhaze September 10 2007, 05:17:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this.

itsu_shinki October 9 2007, 23:37:12 UTC

ROFL HAHAHA that was gold. I really hope you write more of this. lol

dazeyhaze January 3 2008, 08:23:40 UTC

Thank you for the feedback.