Fanfic: The Greatest Enemy [2/?]

[dazeyhaze]

Title: The Greastest Enemy [2/?]
Rating: PG-13
Genre: General
Pairing: Sasu/Naru
Summary: Being the Fourth Hokage meant he had many enemies. So who did he consider his greatest enemy?
Warnings: Over-protective father. There may also be a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me. No copyright infringement is

Comments

[chibiten]

Hi! I just discovered this, and I'm really loving it. Seems that it hasn't been updated for a while...I really hope you continue writing. Minato VS Sasuke is just so much fun~ Thanks for writing this. :)

[pervert_bitch]

Have recently found it. And I really really love that chibi pervert that you have made of Sasuke XD
Hope you haven't abandoned it because it surely is a novel idea :)

[naruharrylover]

OMG!!!!!! I almost had a heart attack reading this, it was so cute i loved it!^_^

I mean is just too cute not too!:D

i really hope u write more of these!;P

[kiuolo]

Oh my gosh! This was almost too cute! x3 I loved it so, so much!

I like that you wrote this in Minato's point of view, as it just makes everything ten times better! And the battle of wills going on between him and Sasuke... Hehe. Go, Sasuke! Go! -cheers-

This story is just wonderful! =D Seriously. I love idea, and you've had me giggling the whole way through. Especially when Minato was having his little break down ("Don’t you want to be a good ninja? What happened to your dream of becoming a good ninja? Why don’t you want to be a good ninja anymore? Why? Why Naruto? Why?” Hahaha!).

Please, please continue! ^^ I really want to know what happens next!

[snowy_way]

KAWAII!! That was so cute! An insperation to all chibi naruto and sasuke fans. Well done, I look forward to more.