Skin and Bones

Feb 10, 2010 14:57



Title: Skin and Bones
Rating: K+
Spoilers: Up to 6x03 (What Kate Does)
Summary: Sawyer/Juliet angst; “And what had he ever done for her? What had he ever done besides ask her to stay?"
Author’s Note: After last night’s ep, I had to write this.

Enjoy,
Sara

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He assumes that three years is long enough... )

author: beyondthepen, category: angst, one-shot

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airbefore February 10 2010, 21:27:20 UTC
Nope, those aren't tears in my eyes. *sniff* Not at all. Just a little dust.

Kate was never here when he wanted her, and now she’s everywhere.
Brilliant.

Absolutely lovely, my friend.

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beyondthepen February 11 2010, 01:37:56 UTC
Glad you liked it! =D

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little_red_kite February 11 2010, 00:40:40 UTC
I was literally just about to quote the same line as the comment above, so perfect. You captured his thoughts so well. Beautiful and heartbreaking all at once *sniffles*

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beyondthepen February 11 2010, 01:38:44 UTC
I liked that line too. Well, obviously...I wrote it. Thanks for your wonderful compliment!

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bayloriffic February 11 2010, 01:34:26 UTC
OH MAN, this is so sad! (but in a completely wonderful way)

I especially liked the last part as a way to incorporate the whole "dutch" thing WITH the engagement thing and also make the whole thing end on a hopeful note. So sweet ♥

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beyondthepen February 11 2010, 01:39:32 UTC
Glad you caught that! And yeah, I couldn't let me be THAT angsty. I thought about ending it without that part, but I just couldn't do it.

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omgitshbc February 11 2010, 08:02:09 UTC
This is just amazing, I may have cried a little. *sniffle*

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beyondthepen February 12 2010, 02:18:48 UTC
Aww, I'm sorry you cried a little...well, I guess that was kinda the point...:) Thanks for reading!

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pengyn February 11 2010, 15:26:34 UTC
This is where he’d asked her to stay; this is where he’d let her go.

*sob*

This was beautiful. Dammit to hell, lol, fanfiction is trying to kill me.

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beyondthepen February 12 2010, 02:20:09 UTC
I know, right?! There's an angsty overload out there, but I love it all! Thanks for your kind words!

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