About Sidebar

Aug 12, 2016 23:28

Here's some text for the About sidebar for my blog. Comments? Thanks ( Read more... )

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platofish August 13 2016, 17:20:52 UTC

The text says you and your client are both independent travelers of a certain age. But, it doesn't suggest why they client might need your services. Perhaps saying 'you have a trip in mind, but don't have the time to plan the details' as one reason why they should consider hiring you.

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days_unfolding August 13 2016, 20:13:06 UTC
Thanks! Sometimes it's hard to see omissions like that when you write it.

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gurdonark August 14 2016, 02:40:10 UTC
You'd love to have independent travelers of all ages, I suspect.
I also think you'd like to please the novice but non-package customer as well.

I think you want to offer a variety of experiences for a variety of tastes and budgets, without the cookie-cutter experiences built into the usual travel ads.

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