But the crazy thing is that the story is really chaotic and meant for me, thus reflecting my spirit and yet I can't reconnect properly. 3 days on a beginning is quite the effort, but I will walk through it. No other way to get better at editing, than to wrack my mind and find ways to click back into a story. The POV is making me nervous.
Is it omni? Or close third. I think I remember it being omni. Send it too me in pieces if you need to. I'll look at what you've done so far to the beginning, make any suggestions I have, if any and then send it back to you.
No, this has to be 1st person as it is some sort of clensing ritual for me, but I would like to do that. I am in the strange mood to be able to write it. Will sned you soem bits asap.
LOL! My sentences tend to get short and choppy when I'm distracted (or I'm in a hurry). But seriously, I do hope things get better for you. And I'd love to read your stuff when you're finished. :)
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