I'm Ready (one-shot)

[daydream4way]

Title: I’m Ready (S/A)
Author: daydream4way
Pairing: Jalex
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,571
POV: 2nd person POV (Alex). Thought I'd try my hand at a different writing style.
Summary: Alex loses his virginity to Jack.

Comments

[barakats_bitch]

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THIS IS AMAZING AND PERFECT AND OH MY GOD I CAN'T COPE
brb, cold shower

Ok, so, this was seriously great. You're an excellent writer and I love the fact that it's in 2nd person, because fics are hardly ever written like this. Absolutely marvelous!!!

[daydream4way]

ahhh!!! thank you so much!! your praise has made me blush! i loved writing it in 2nd person :D thank you!!

[lindsey2278]

"You're naked. Jack's naked."

BEST opening line to a fic that I have ever read haha.

But seriously I loved this, It was a perfect mix of smut and fluff and the POV was so unique! For the first time in my life I felt like I had a dick haha great job!!

[daydream4way]

asdghoadboou!!!!! thank you so much! i always LOVE getting comments from other writers, it makes me feel super awesome! and i'm glad you felt like you had a dick, (even if it was only for even a short time lol)

[valeohyeah]

omg hot smut was hOT

unpopular opinion i really enjoy reading second person fics so BRAVO

[daydream4way]

Oh my gosh thank you so much! :)

[chakky85]

The whole thing was excellent, but the ending is just beautiful! You wrote them so in synch with each other. Nicely done!

[daydream4way]

aww thank you so much!! ;)

[jalex_bandwhore]

love love love love love this

edit: you tagged it Merrikat on atb instead of Jalex.

[daydream4way]

thank you thank you thank you.

edit: thanks for telling me ;)