Title: I’m Ready (S/A)
Author:
daydream4wayPairing: Jalex
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,571
POV: 2nd person POV (Alex). Thought I'd try my hand at a different writing style.
Summary: Alex loses his virginity to Jack.
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You love him, and you think it's about time you show him how much. )
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THIS IS AMAZING AND PERFECT AND OH MY GOD I CAN'T COPE
brb, cold shower
Ok, so, this was seriously great. You're an excellent writer and I love the fact that it's in 2nd person, because fics are hardly ever written like this. Absolutely marvelous!!!
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BEST opening line to a fic that I have ever read haha.
But seriously I loved this, It was a perfect mix of smut and fluff and the POV was so unique! For the first time in my life I felt like I had a dick haha great job!!
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unpopular opinion i really enjoy reading second person fics so BRAVO
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edit: you tagged it Merrikat on atb instead of Jalex.
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edit: thanks for telling me ;)
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