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I'm Ready (one-shot)

Jun 19, 2012 08:33

Title: I’m Ready (S/A)
Author: daydream4way
Pairing: Jalex
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,571
POV: 2nd person POV (Alex). Thought I'd try my hand at a different writing style.
Summary: Alex loses his virginity to Jack.

( You love him, and you think it's about time you show him how much. )

pairing: jalex, one-shot, rating: nc-17

Comments 15

somanysauce June 24 2012, 11:17:24 UTC

O________O i am dead omfg
This is perfectly written smut holyshit
WHY CANT I WRITE GAY SEX LIKE THIS?!

daydream4way June 24 2012, 15:08:15 UTC

Ahskefdjdkdlrdj!!!! Thank you SO MUCH!!

atlaregay July 9 2012, 01:37:49 UTC

FUCK THAT WAS GREAT. it can be really hard to do successful writing in second person but that was fucking brilliant and really... relatable? it was just awesome ok.

daydream4way July 9 2012, 13:08:59 UTC

YAY! thank you SO MUCH! i'm glad my smut was up to par ;)

atlaregay July 10 2012, 22:06:15 UTC

hell yeah. ;)