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day_dream_girl1

Conflicting Glances - Chapter 4

Feb 16, 2007 20:18

This chapter was a last minute addition, and I'm still not particularly happy with it, but I thought the story needed it for setting up the next chapter - which I'm still planning on putting up on Sunday night. So, please bear with me! :)
( Chloe sank into the warm water. )

jack/chloe, 24, glances, fic

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day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:08:54 UTC

Thanks

abbyl February 16 2007, 21:05:38 UTC

Hand him a gun and place him alone in a room with twenty terrorist, and he’d get the job done. But ask him to go to lavish parties and be nice to people who he didn’t like and didn’t like him, and he was as out of place as an Eskimo on Bondai beach.

Love that line! I don't know why you're not happy with it. I love it!

day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:09:45 UTC

Thank you very much!

rorylie February 16 2007, 21:21:10 UTC

Again, I just love this story.

day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:10:24 UTC

Thank you! :)

failegaidin February 16 2007, 22:22:54 UTC

Words cannot explain how into this story I am. Keep it up!

And I did enjoy this chapter, despite what you might think about it.

day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:11:44 UTC

Thanks, I appreciate it :)

anonymous February 16 2007, 23:16:30 UTC

"Just because Chloe had disappeared, didn’t mean he stopped worrying about her. If anything, she was on his mind all the more. He couldn’t help it. There was only so long he could take not talking to her without driving himself crazy."

As those that have come before have wisely put it, I so love this chapter! It only makes me more anxious when he'll figure out what it all means, that he loves her, not Audrey. Um...other than that, can it be Sunday? I want another update!

day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:13:56 UTC

Tomorrow is Sunday, so it's not that far away now!