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day_dream_girl1

Conflicting Glances - Chapter 4

Feb 16, 2007 20:18

This chapter was a last minute addition, and I'm still not particularly happy with it, but I thought the story needed it for setting up the next chapter - which I'm still planning on putting up on Sunday night. So, please bear with me! :)
( Chloe sank into the warm water. )

jack/chloe, 24, glances, fic

Comments 16

silver_p February 17 2007, 00:41:28 UTC

I loved that last exchange between Jack and Bill. I laughed out loud at Karen's niece's description of Chloe. Down to a T! :D

This story is coming along wonderfully, keep up the great work!

day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:16:05 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

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day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:16:59 UTC

You managed to sum up exactly why I thought I needed this chapter! Thank you!

melodyclark February 17 2007, 10:09:10 UTC

that woman always finds some way to surprise me.”

I love that line!! In the words of the Cowardly Lion (whom I seem to be channeling a lot these days), "ain't it the truth, ain't it the truth".

Going great, my friend. Keep at it.

day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 15:17:51 UTC

Thank you!

LOVE IT! scianaphobia February 17 2007, 19:45:03 UTC

I love this fic, just because Jack and Chloe don't fall for each other right away and it's more like how things happen in reality, instead of the basic happily ever after ones. I love those too, but I love this one alot!

Continue please, this is amazing!

Re: LOVE IT! day_dream_girl1 February 17 2007, 21:42:32 UTC

I plan on continuing this, don't worry. Tomorrow evening actually ;)