Blue Skies Prompt #2: Skyrockets in Flight (Tangled)

[mrstater]

Title: Sky Rockets in Flight
Author: mrstater
Prompt: #2, picture of fireworks
Fandom: Tangled
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Eugene/Rapunzel
Rating & Warnings: rated PG for mild innuendo
Word Count: 725
Summary: Fireworks mark the end of Corona's Royal Wedding festivities, but for Eugene and Rapunzel, the party's only getting started.

Comments

[synnerxx]

This is seriously cute. :D

[mrstater]

Thank you!

[gilpin25]

Though I did ask him to stand up with me as my Best Horse; it was only fair seeing as Rapunzel had Pascal as Frog of Honor.

Thank goodness I wasn't eating at that point as I'd probably have ended up in A&E!

I've said this before but you are SO good at capturing Eugene's voice and hilarious internal monologue. I don't know which I enjoyed most, him being captivated by Rapunzel, her fury that fireworks aren't a given to all wedding nights (that may be more accurate than she realizes;)), and his utter confidence that they'll be setting a few off themselves very shortly. So I'll have to say all of it! ♥

Now I want to hear the Best Horse speech. ;)

[mrstater]

Thank goodness I wasn't eating at that point as I'd probably have ended up in A&E!

Glad there were no accidents, but I'm very pleased this sparked the proper reaction, as that line was for you. ;)

I have too much fun writing Eugene, and I'm hoping Disney of the many sequels is reading my fic so I can get hired to do the screenplay. (Except Disney are ridiculous about intellectual property and would more likely sue me first.) Your review gave me a big grin. Thanks very much for saying such nice things.

Now I want to hear the Best Horse speech.

I believe it went something like, "Neigh neigh whinnie neigh neigh snort." C.S. Lewis was a lot better at writing horse dialogue than I am. ;)

[yuenmei]

Gah, I love your innuendo. You're such a tease though!!! ^_^

I really like Eugene thinking about how he never thought this kind of celebration would happen for him. He really has come a long way. I think that kind of introspection is lacking in the fandom. Even those few lines interested me!

And I like him glowing <3

[mrstater]

It's Eugene who's a tease. ;) Very pleased you like him being all glowy and introspective. As funny as he is in the movie, it's those undertones of depth that I find make him even more compelling. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[litlover12]

You know, it would be really cool to see you try your hand at Rapunzel's POV sometime! :-) Just for kicks.

[mrstater]

I like doing Eugen's 1st person narrative for continuity with the movie. I hear his voice so clearly in my head!

[dynastessa]

SO MUCH GRINNING.

This is fantastic.

[mrstater]

:D I'm doing so much grinning that you liked. Thanks for telling me so.