Fic: "Smoke & Mirrors" - [The Dresden Files]

May 12, 2007 15:27

Title: “Smoke and Mirrors”
Author: Day
Beta'd for grammar by the lovely and talented goodiesfan. Any remaining mistakes are my own ( Read more... )

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luvmeanddespair May 13 2007, 23:47:28 UTC
I like this! It's an interesting idea of waht went on! ^^ Poor Bob and Harry. *pets them* I did like the Shakespeare, too. Oh, Harry! XD

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day221b May 14 2007, 01:55:13 UTC
Thank you! I was rewatching "Bad Blood" the other day, just waiting for the good parts where Bob has a hissy with Bianca in the room, and zeroed in on just how shattered Harry was compared to the scene given us in "What About Bob?" right after Morningway's death. It got me thinking.

As for the Shakespeare? I couldn't resist. Flash and Dazzle, baby. ;D

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mk_tortie May 31 2007, 00:23:50 UTC
Hey! Just thought I'd introduce myself cos I friended you, I hope you don't mind :) Your writing is fantastic!

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day221b May 31 2007, 00:53:27 UTC
Thank you so much! Within the next couple of weeks I hope to have another one completed that is massive in length. Eep!

I see we share similar interests including LotR and Scrubs. And dare I say The Dresden Files? :) Friended you back!

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leaper182 February 4 2008, 21:10:49 UTC
Please, dear God, tell me you wrote a sequel to this where Bob explains that he was lying to Harry, tricking him because he really does care about Harry, and that he wants to protect Harry, and he really does love him a lot.

Please? *big brown eyes*

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day221b February 4 2008, 23:53:28 UTC
LOL! I'm honored my fic moved you to not only to leave a comment but caused your icon hamster angst. As for a sequel, I do have one in the works (of sorts) that I started way back in May, got 150 pages in and came down with a terrible case of writer's block. I've been debating back and forth for some time whether I should post my W-I-P to LJ or not but haven't gotten up the nerve because of the fact that it is a W-I-P. What do you think? Should I take the leap anyway? You might want to check back in a couple of days to see if I've decided to say, "What the heck?!" and just post the dang thing. :)

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leaper182 February 5 2008, 01:40:52 UTC
Hee. I whip out that icon when I'm all sad ( ... )

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day221b February 5 2008, 02:49:37 UTC
If I'm being pushy, please let me know, because it's not my intention. I'd love to see the sequel to this, because it really is a good bridge between what was shown in "What About Bob" and "Bad Blood".

Do I think you're being pushy? Not at all. I would love a second opinion and a swift kick in the rear if you can offer me one to get this story finished. I will say that the part that made you sad is addressed in what's written so far. Hopefully you'll come away with a warm fuzzy there.

And thank you for the compliment about my story being a good bridge. It made my day. :)

What's your email addy? I'm thinking I have at least 5 parts (perhaps 6) of 12-20 page sections completed starting from the beginning and moving on from there. Would you like them all at once or one at a time?

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I want more!!! PLEASE quickyfant September 16 2008, 04:45:42 UTC
I want more please! I searched for a sequel but did not find one!!! This is great but how does it go on, what happens when Harry comes back for Bob??? I would love to hear that dialogue, how do they establish a new relationship? How do they heal their relationship again??? PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!

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sorry but the story is too good, I want a sequel SO BAD!! :) quickyfant September 17 2008, 01:00:56 UTC
Now I officially am stalking your journal. I am going to open camp until a new fic appears!!! ;)
I just read all the commentaries and found this, quoting you directly:
"As for a sequel, I do have one in the works (of sorts) that I started way back in May, got 150 pages in ... What do you think? Should I take the leap anyway? You might want to check back in a couple of days to see if I've decided to say, "What the heck?!" and just post the dang thing. :)"

And I went dizzy, you have 150 pages of sequel??? PLEASE I BEG YOU share it!!! YES, yes to your questions!!!
Please take the leap, Please post!!!
I don't have such a wonderful hamster angst icon, but please imagine me as THE angst hamster right now!
Sincerely, your current stalker!!! ;)

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Re: sorry but the story is too good, I want a sequel SO BAD!! :) day221b September 21 2008, 05:30:53 UTC
Hey! Sorry, I haven't been ignoring you. I've actually just returned from a week long vacation to Disney World and I am beyond exhausted. (But so happy to find such wonderful comments in my LJ! If you want I can send you my now MONSTEROUS sequel, but I'll need your email addy first. It's not completed yet, so...if you're willing to look past it, I think you can tell where it's going. Anyway, I must go. I'm actually dizzy from exhaustion at this point. :D Talk to you soon. :) And thank you once again for such AWESOME comments while I was away!

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Re: sorry but the story is too good, I want a sequel SO BAD!! :) quickyfant September 21 2008, 18:18:58 UTC
YUHUUU!!! Thanks for answering!!! Disney World, nice!!! :) I hope you had a great time!!!
I am jumping up and down at the thought of a MONSTROUS sequel!!! ;)
My email is quickyfant@animail.net
I am SO excited, I really liked this story!!!!
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!!

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Re: sorry but the story is too good, I want a sequel SO BAD!! :) day221b September 21 2008, 19:34:18 UTC
Hey! I had a wonderful time! Thanks for asking! LOL! I'm thrilled you're excited about the sequel. You'll have to tell me what you think of what I have so far as feedback keeps me focused and motivated. ;)

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