Naruto ficlet - The Ones You Make

May 15, 2005 02:52

Tis a ficlet, more a vignette than anything, in honor of the birthday of Kankurou, and of duelist. So sorry I missed you today, bro! I suk!

Here's a pressie <3 Many congratulations on achieving a 'score'! ;D

Children who became shinobi at a young age didn't have many celebratory rituals. )

naruto, fic

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ex_res_judic324 May 15 2005, 15:21:13 UTC
;lskadjg;alksgh AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

[snuggles sandsibs] they cling to each other so hard that sometimes I wonder if they really know how to be independent of each other. I think trying would probably break something within them. Even Gaara. Or, probably, especially Gaara.

love, love, love

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datenshiblue May 15 2005, 21:19:48 UTC
*hugs* <3

It's hard for me to imagine any of them getting ultimately away from the others, but then I've been influenced. ;)

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ex_res_judic324 May 15 2005, 22:28:43 UTC
You're icon kills me. No other anime character gets to me quite like Gaara. ;_; Boy needs a hug and a nap.

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dirtyoldlady May 15 2005, 15:43:31 UTC
The idea of the puppet show is so full of cuteness, as is the notion of the sneaky present-hiding tricks. :) And then you follow up with Gaara trying to take part while remaining apart, which just... really fits in a really sad way. It was a beautiful vignette. :)

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datenshiblue May 15 2005, 21:21:50 UTC
yeah, it's hard to write about the Sand sibs without a touch of the bittersweet. I blame Kishimoto-sensei. ;)

*snuggles*

<3

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pink_madness May 15 2005, 16:20:02 UTC
this is so beautiful! i love the silent interaction between the siblings and it fits so perfectly, how they would go about doing things for one another without ever saying anything.

thank you for the wonderful vignette! ^^

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datenshiblue May 15 2005, 21:25:13 UTC
you are welcome. <3

thank you for reading it. yes, there is a sort of knowing conspiracy of silence feel to the Sand sibs that is all too familiar, if not devoid of loving.

<3

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babaca May 15 2005, 16:36:34 UTC
Wai! So sweet and so sad. *starts her want to hug the stuffing out of Gaara whimper* And I can see that Temari and Kankurou would sneakily exchange gifts with one another because their dad was an asshole and that would be the only way they could get some type of familial bonding. I love this ficlet bonne!

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datenshiblue May 15 2005, 21:29:42 UTC
*hugs* <3

hee hee - hugging Gaara might be dangerous, but I know what you mean!!

*nuzzles*

glad you liked. :D

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squeakchan May 15 2005, 17:20:07 UTC
Wai, so adorable! And bittersweet too. But but but so Sandsib to the core it's perfect! Because I can totally see them doing something like that and everything and it's sad because Gaara really wasn't a part of them but he was, or at least kinda wanted to be, and I'm babbling but that's ok because this was heart.

*glomps*

Thank you, Gaara-san!

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datenshiblue May 15 2005, 21:31:41 UTC
*nuzzles* <3

I think it's the bittersweet that keeps me hooked on them, y'know?

*chu*

thanks, darlin, I'm glad you liked it. <333

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