Luminous Dust 12/16

[darthdolly]

Title: Luminous Dust
Author: Dolly (darthdolly)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Anakin/Obi-Wan
Timeframe: post RotS AU
Summary: coming soon. maybe! ^^;;
Spoilers: possibly for RotS
Warnings: Contains slash and mentions of mature themes, but nothing explicit.
Notes: This is the sequel to my story What Comes of It, which can be found HERE. So you'll probably

Comments

[ex_jardin_sa642]

Another great chapter and Anakin is so predictable very typical of him to just drop everything to go and save Obi-Wan even though it seems Obi-Wan is already in no need of help thanks to Jade.

Oh and is this Jade as in Mara Jade? Or maybe we'll find out later... I did like her interaction with Obi-Wan and here's hoping they'll meet again.

As for Thrawn I don't know anything about him except he's blue and that he's a character from the EU.

I am very interested in knowing how this turns out.

[darthdolly]

Thank you! As for Thrawn, I just randomly picked a name I remembered from the EU to use in this role. ^^; He's not really an important character, and you know as much about him as I do! lol.

[ryuniel]

I've been waiting for this fic and am very glad to see this new update.
So Anakin is going to kill them all for hurting Obi-Wan. hehe I like dark Anakin. He is so fierce in love. I hope to see them reunite soon.

[darthdolly]

I'm glad you liked this part, thanks for replying! They will be back together soon . . .

[mickeylover303]

I feel like such a tart for not reading your story. But thanks to a certain Erin Maloney from the forum, I was hooked on Stargate. I even dropped my Harry Potter obssession for a while (shame on me).

But as always, I love how the story is progressing. I love how Obi-Wan is forbidden redemption for Anakin. Anakin seems torn between what makes him a better person and what he knows he doesn't deserve. I love how he is afraid to love Obi-Wan because he knows Obi-Wan will love him conditionally, unlike Padme. As soon as that topic came up I knew you were planning something heinous for Anakin.

The poor thing. His salvation will become his downfall like so many times before. However, my fingers are crossed for at least an not too troubled ending. I saw you have another story. So I can at least keep happy thoughts...for now.

One more thing: Malen. Oh my goodness. "Pretty whore," that is awful. I wished right then and there Ani was there to choke him...like Vader did in Episode IV.

[darthdolly]

Wow, that's funny, I'm also a fan of Stargate and HP! XD

I'm glad you like how I'm taking the story, and don't worry -- I don't like dire, gloomy endings, even in darker stories. ;)

[aislinn_tredor]

does no one know Obi-Wan is more than just a consort? lol, that makes things a bit more fun ^_^ He's a Jedi Master kiddies. And Admiral Thrawn, I've heard of him before. and this 'Jade' woman. Is that her first name or is she Mara Jade's mother? We're not far enough in the furure for her to be Mara are we?

And Anakin's pissed off, so even if Obi-Wan can't be convinced, the're planning on killing him and Vader starting a war with the Rebels to keep the Empire going until Jade and Thrawn can overthrow him and take power for themselves?

Thanks for the great chapter. Love Anakin just rushing off for his love. He'd always do it in a heartbeat for Obi-Wan ♥

[darthdolly]

Nope, Obi-Wan doesn't look like a Jedi Master so most people tend to write him off as unimportant. As for who Jade is, I will simply remind you that this is AU and leave you to your ponderings. ^_~ Thanks for replying!

[anakin415]

ohhhhhhhhhhh ohhhhhhhhhh I soo need to see that explosion of hatred when Vader comes. Why cant people understand you DO NOT FUCK with Vader. Stupid stupid people lol AHHHHHHHH and Mama Jade, isnt she the empassholeors sister or niece or cousin some sort of worthless relative ??????? Well as always I look forward to the next installment.

[darthdolly]

Thanks for your comment! Yep, Vader/Anakin is going to be mad . . .