MfWAT: To Look But Not to Touch

Jul 24, 2010 15:39

Memories from Western Air Temple
Chapter Title: To Look But Not to Touch
Characters: Ty Lee, Mai, Azula, Zuko, Aang
Arc: Unity Arc
Setting: after No More Running, before We Could Die TomorrowRating: K ( Read more... )

fic: memories from western air temple, fanfiction, pairing: zuko/aang, fandom: avatar: the last airbender

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jill_rg July 24 2010, 14:42:32 UTC
Zuko was well aware that he had an intense personality. He hated with his all, he loved with his all and he could do both at the same time, towards the same person even.

Excellent summation.

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darth_animus July 24 2010, 15:42:33 UTC
Thank you. It's one of my favorite parts in the chapter, so I'm glad to know it's not just me being biased. XD

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quartzteeth September 22 2010, 06:52:11 UTC
Of course. I love him.
Goddamn. Even Mai agrees that this was THE BEST response Aang could have given :')

Tyzula's so canon, that's probably where it came form. Your subconscious mind was just being loyal to the characters. Even sadistic insane princesses need love too!

Zuko truly felt the distance that was between them now, and now he was thinking about that barrier, unsure if it was a new development or if it had always been there.
woooooooooooow. Really dig this line.

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darth_animus September 22 2010, 11:59:52 UTC
Aang's could at answering questions like that; everyone agrees even when they're embarrassed by how blunt and sincere he is. XD

You do have a point there. Ty Lee and Azula have such a complex complex relationship that it has to be said twice. There are so many layers, so many emotions and I just don't know how to depict that completely. This is the closest I could get.

Thank you. I feel like I went all out on 'impact lines' in this one. The insight chapters tend to be like that.

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