Drift (1/1), John/Rodney, NC-17

Mar 23, 2008 01:23

Title: Drift
Summary: “Even my nightmares are selfish,” Rodney says miserably.
Prompts: #87 'Dreams' from tamingthemuse (obvious!), #14 'Distract' from prompt table 3 @sg_15_fics (obscure!)
Rating: NC-17 (really, hard R, but I'm fuzzy on the lines, here)
Warnings: sex? yeah. Not too angsty, spoilers for 4.04
Word Count: 2,382
Disclaimer: Not mine, which should be ( Read more... )

fanfiction: sga: john sheppard, fanfiction: sga: john/rodney, fanfiction: sga: rodney mckay, fic challenges: sga: sg_15_fics, fandom:sga, fanfiction: sga: rated nc-17

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darsynia March 23 2008, 23:05:31 UTC
Thank you :) I really see the two of them having that bond of theirs reinforced--especially by Rodney's violent throwing off of the fake John--by the experience, but both still the hesitant men they always have been about expressing that. Thanks for taking the time to let me know you liked it ^^

Rodney's SUCH a pillow hogger, it's practically canon :)

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jessebee March 23 2008, 16:11:03 UTC
Oh, my, this is lovely. The angst followed by the sweetness, the breathless discovery of the longed-for first time. Nicely done! And the sexing is superb, you've got a nice touch, hot and explicit but in no way crass or overdone. Brava.

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darsynia March 23 2008, 23:06:46 UTC
*grins broadly* Thank you! This means a lot, because there are SO many fantastic authors in this fandom and I really wanted to do this justice. I'm dancing on air! Thanks again <3

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sheafrotherdon March 23 2008, 16:46:06 UTC
This is lovely - and I particularly liked that Rodney came while looking at John, with everything writ large on his face, so much so that all john could do was kiss him. SO well done!

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darsynia March 23 2008, 23:09:01 UTC
\o/

I am so pleased you liked it! It seemed so intimate for John's emotions to show when they weren't overcome by desire, and for Rodney's to show when they were... in any case, thanks for the feedback, I'm grinning :)

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thrace_adams March 23 2008, 17:27:29 UTC
So sweet! Love that they kind of sought each other out. Very nice.

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darsynia March 24 2008, 19:38:58 UTC
Thank you! I definitely see them gravitating toward each other after that experience, canonically, whether or not it involved kissage ;)

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sihayab March 23 2008, 17:33:19 UTC
Oh, lovely! I love how they're both undone by their encounters at the beginning, but together make everything right!

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darsynia March 24 2008, 19:40:28 UTC
Thank you :) I found it really interesting that the writers made the dreams a part of each person's personality, even Rodney's selfish nature--which makes John's nightmare all the more meaningful... ;)

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