Title: Help, I’m Alive 3/? Author: Liv Fandom: Supernatural/Firefly Characters: Dean, Bobby, River, Sam 30-shinyfics Prompt: 16. Spring 30-kisses Prompt: 12. In a good mood
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So as usual, love. Just a quick grammar edit: "When River orgasmic, she took Sam with her, made her see what she saw, feel what she felt."
I think it's supposed to be "When River had an orgasm, she took Sam wit her, made him see what she saw, feel what she felt." But I could be wrong. ^^ Love all the same.
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Just a quick grammar edit:
"When River orgasmic, she took Sam with her, made her see what she saw, feel what she felt."
I think it's supposed to be "When River had an orgasm, she took Sam wit her, made him see what she saw, feel what she felt."
But I could be wrong. ^^ Love all the same.
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