Comments | darkkevlar: Middle Pleasures 3/3

darkkevlar

Middle Pleasures 3/3

Mar 01, 2007 22:57

Pairing(s): Don/Coop/Lia(OFC)
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s):Slash
Author's Notes: As always thank you my beta bubbleslayer who as always helps me with content and reigns me when needed

Part 3

The three of them made their way to the bedroom. They stood at the foot of the bed, all looking slightly nervous about the journey they were about to take.

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numbers_slash, don/coop

Comments 13

gyen_gaoltosing March 4 2007, 03:21:40 UTC

Anal sex...to have or not to have??? XD It's a very good question that probably goes through everyone's mind at least once in their lifetime.

I liked your portrayal of the situation. I mean, if I were Lia, I'd be envious of Don & Coop's relationship, too. And I liked the fact that Lia wasn't immediately into it--it took time for her to relax, and I thought that was realistic. A very interesting piece! :D

darkkevlar March 4 2007, 14:27:07 UTC

Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed ( ... )

irena_adler March 4 2007, 08:15:15 UTC

I've heard that with double penetration the men can feel each other, that's so sexy. I have to say I'm feeling real Lee envy here! *g*

darkkevlar March 4 2007, 14:17:53 UTC

"I've heard that with double penetration the men can feel each other, that's so sexy. I have to say I'm feeling real Lee envy here! *g*"

I know that is so h0t. My beta told me that and then i did some research at the book store on the topic of sex (yes I am dorkus)

and if Lee ever is dumb enough to leave I'll let D/C know you are ready to fill in!

heeheee

neur0vanity March 5 2007, 10:23:42 UTC

“Damn Don, I can feel your cock through her.”
“Oh shit, I can feel you come.”

*wibble* Wow. Those are the lines to beat this week on my kink-o-meter. Seriously, that's so insanely hot. Can't Breathe.

darkkevlar March 5 2007, 21:45:54 UTC

*Pats NV on the cheek*

NV? You ok? *places cool cloth on her forehead*

Someone get me the smelling salts... NV is on the floor again......

Don't worry NV we got your back, Coop, Don and Me.

nicelyobsessed July 16 2007, 14:22:14 UTC

“I do not fall asleep, that’s all Coop.” Don said, “He’s old. He can’t help it.”

Dies of laughing!
I really loves this part (not only for the sex *g*) I liked Lia's curiosity and her new experience.
Great my dear

darkkevlar July 16 2007, 14:59:52 UTC

yeah tbe boys are fun to write.

I am glad you liked. I think and from what some others wrote that I did a good job with showinbg Lia being curious and not sure if she wants. But I do think the boys would be gentle and try to take care of her...

thank ya

nicelyobsessed July 16 2007, 15:20:41 UTC

Yep, you did a great job, you described very well Lia's apprehension and the sweetness of the boys.

lorientad October 25 2007, 20:01:03 UTC

good work. i really like how you made lia hesitancy came front. and like that she's equal with those two horny devils

darkkevlar October 29 2007, 03:37:19 UTC

Yeah she is equal in the horney ness.. I mean how could she not be? Have you seen those 2?

Yeah your comment is another part of my canon that I need to work in one day that she has totally become thier 'love slave' to be cliche....

lorientad October 29 2007, 07:01:38 UTC

yeah i've seen them and it took all i had to not drool!!!!!!
it's not cliche, it could have been Don the love slave since it's for him that Lia and Coop came together.

darkkevlar October 31 2007, 00:27:20 UTC

ha ha.. true..

*sigh* they are so yummy. I don't blame the muse for making Lia that way....