Middle Pleasures 3/3

Mar 01, 2007 22:57



Pairing(s): Don/Coop/Lia(OFC)
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s):Slash
Author's Notes: As always thank you my beta bubbleslayer who as always helps me with content and reigns me when needed

Part 3

The three of them made their way to the bedroom. They stood at the foot of the bed, all looking slightly nervous about the journey they were about to take.

Don ( Read more... )

numbers_slash, don/coop

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darkkevlar March 4 2007, 14:27:07 UTC
Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed.

"I'd be envious of Don & Coop's relationship, too"

THat is the heart of it. SHe knows Don loves her but she is jealous (the most jealous out of the three of them) of D/C's relationship.....so that plays into the story a bit. I think sometimes she feels like an outsider (i know I would) so understanding them better helps...

AS far as the sex:

TAlking back and forth with my beta she liked how I made it realistic and how I made Don more clinical about it.. SHe thought that made it h0tter cause he was more concenred (and COop too) that she would like it and not get hurt....

My beta and this book that I found at Border's gave me some great insight on how portray this scene and all.

"Anal sex...to have or not to have??? XD It's a very good question that probably goes through everyone's mind at least once in their lifetime."

you're right it does so I Think it was a legitimate thing to for to talk to them about but like anyone (men and women) i think it is a touch subject but I think it would be something that would come up in a relationship such as this.
Like I said your fic the offer kind of gave me the idea for this fic.

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