Oh, she's a bounty hunter? *looks at Marland* XD; But she doesn't get shunned... does she? :3;;
I waaaant to write humor. XD; *leaves the humor to Tekatme*
It would be cool if Shanras used a sword. A...sword mage. XD Depends on what kind of magic she uses though. Doesn't sound like she uses magic that boosts her sword skills?
Which means, yeeey, Aldoran is going to talk with his mouth. XDD; Ahahaha. XD; The way you put it makes this seem like a very big event. I guess it is... XD
I was trying to make her shunned. XDD;; (1st: only male/male bond. 2nd: Only female/male bond. 3rd-or earlier: hasn't found out she has magic until past the normal age. 4th: only non-human bond. *sneeeeeerk*) She's not shunned in this one yet.
At least it's not seen as bounty hunting - it's more protection.
"A...sword mage." XDDD
"Doesn't sound like she uses magic that boosts her sword skills?" I think the magic is based on will-power, so, if she wanted to, she could magic her sword. Still. The magic is very vague at the moment.
"Ahahaha. XD; The way you put it makes this seem like a very big event. I guess it is... XD" It iiiiis though.
"Investigative story? :DDDD" XDDD;; Noooooo. Shanras and Aldoran are sent somewhere to protect, and on the way, they find clues that something else is going on. lkda Anyway, I'm finding it weird that I'm starting this mid-way through, because I feel like I'm missing the important part where the readers get to know the characters as they first get to know each other...XD;;
Oh yeah, there was that. The fact that their bond wasn't going to be like normal bonds? So that's not one of the premises now? :3
Eeee, clues!
Hm, but it doesn't always have to be the characters getting to know each other if that's not the focus of the story. XD; Though that part of the story would be important to show their bond maybe?
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I waaaant to write humor. XD; *leaves the humor to Tekatme*
It would be cool if Shanras used a sword. A...sword mage. XD Depends on what kind of magic she uses though. Doesn't sound like she uses magic that boosts her sword skills?
Which means, yeeey, Aldoran is going to talk with his mouth. XDD;
Ahahaha. XD; The way you put it makes this seem like a very big event. I guess it is... XD
Investigative story? :DDDD
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At least it's not seen as bounty hunting - it's more protection.
"A...sword mage."
XDDD
"Doesn't sound like she uses magic that boosts her sword skills?"
I think the magic is based on will-power, so, if she wanted to, she could magic her sword. Still. The magic is very vague at the moment.
"Ahahaha. XD; The way you put it makes this seem like a very big event. I guess it is... XD"
It iiiiis though.
"Investigative story? :DDDD"
XDDD;; Noooooo. Shanras and Aldoran are sent somewhere to protect, and on the way, they find clues that something else is going on. lkda Anyway, I'm finding it weird that I'm starting this mid-way through, because I feel like I'm missing the important part where the readers get to know the characters as they first get to know each other...XD;;
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Eeee, clues!
Hm, but it doesn't always have to be the characters getting to know each other if that's not the focus of the story. XD; Though that part of the story would be important to show their bond maybe?
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