You're cutting an entire character out from Searching? Poor guy! Hm, but this will mean Kendal will have slightly more scenes? Will Gahn still exist, or not at all anymore?
Pronoun troubles? But then if they meet other master and slaves who will now be the same gender, you'll have pronoun troubles with... them? :'D
I am currently escaping from the pronoun confusion by writing... 1st person. XDDD
XD;; Yeah - he isn't important or needed for anything specific. I think Kendal will just get some more lines? Whenever he's appeared, Kendal was there too. He's getting completely cut out. X3
... Clearly I haven't thought about it properly. XDD;; Hmm. I think I'll have it slightly easier if it's other people who are the pair? At least then I can use descriptives slightly better with them.
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Pronoun troubles? But then if they meet other master and slaves who will now be the same gender, you'll have pronoun troubles with... them? :'D
I am currently escaping from the pronoun confusion by writing... 1st person. XDDD
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... Clearly I haven't thought about it properly. XDD;; Hmm. I think I'll have it slightly easier if it's other people who are the pair? At least then I can use descriptives slightly better with them.
XD Nice!
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That's true... XD; And they'll probably not show up as much?
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Nope! Maybe. I don't know. XDD *needs a plot before I know* I bet there are going to be pairs all over the place by the end of the planning.
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