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darkfairy72

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Jan 12, 2006 18:12

Ok, so I need critiques and ideas for a title. Any comment would be appreciated. <3 ( Read more... )

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anonymous January 13 2006, 00:29:48 UTC

I don't know...it kind of lacks rythm and the first two lines are a bit cliche, but other than that, the concept is great and I think you could work on it to make it a really exceptional piece of art.

darkfairy72 January 13 2006, 00:31:54 UTC

Thanks. Who are you?

brainohollowpnt January 13 2006, 03:19:20 UTC

Duh

'Perfect Memory'

+ ya seem pretty cool so your added

darkfairy72 January 13 2006, 03:24:12 UTC

Thanks, love.

maddogreebes January 13 2006, 05:06:29 UTC

Lazyboy...

darkfairy72 January 13 2006, 12:21:42 UTC

o.O'

maddogreebes January 13 2006, 21:11:04 UTC

Well you took him to the couch which reminds you of him. So I'm assumming you're on the couch thinking about him while singing this. So.. Laz-Y-Boy. Which is a couch :P

darkfairy72 January 13 2006, 23:22:59 UTC

Ooooh. No. My couch is better than a Lazyboy. You've seen my couch before. It's the shiznit.