Gift Fic!

Oct 01, 2009 00:29

Yeah, I was bored so I wrote this for beckyh2112 .

Takes place in the Evil!Zukoverse, about eight years after the comet passes.  This makes Zuko 24, Yui 18 or 19, and Jet 25 or so.  Hitozi is about four.

The screaming had stopped. )

fandom: avatar, fanfic, character: zuko, character: yujiro, character: jet

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neldluva October 1 2009, 19:20:37 UTC
... I think I need to officially start stalking you now. That was brilliant. I don't know the 'verse (YET!), but I fell in love. Yui sounds like a fascinating character.

*goes to find more*

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dark_puck October 1 2009, 20:34:13 UTC
I do a lot with Yui and her brothers, actually. :D Especially her twin brother, who does not make an appearance in this (gasp, shock).

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neldluva October 1 2009, 21:07:34 UTC
Then my quest shouldn't be too hard! Awesome.

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dark_puck October 1 2009, 21:08:19 UTC
Shall I provide links to make it easier? :D

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beckyh2112 October 1 2009, 20:46:37 UTC
*claps her hands together in delight* Thank you, Pux!

I love how Jet is still calling Zuko 'Lee'. It's even more fun because I know that bit Yui didn't catch was Zuko correcting Jet (again) and getting ignored (again). ^_^

In reply, he grabbed hold of her shirt and hid his face in her... well, they did provide a good place to hide.

*giggles* I like that. Deft bit of wording.

Poor Yui. Watching Zuko and Jet tear through those people... *shivers* Though she did rally considerably once she got back onto footing she was comfortable with. I liked how she and Jet responded to each other so easily, and Zuko being all "get a ROOM".

I swear, I should make an evil!Zuko index.

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dark_puck October 1 2009, 20:51:56 UTC
*pets the Bex*

Yui has never seen the imprisoned Prince Zuko, but by gods she knows the name. I figured that was the best way of getting around that fact. :D

*grins* It was a fun way of handling the fact that Yui has some pretty nice gazongas. AS JET SEEMS TO HAVE NOTICED.

I think Yui was mostly afraid that she would be the next to go down, given how quickly she pulled herself together. And hey, this dude clearly thinks she's hot, and he's a warrior. Clearly sexing is on the agenda ASAP.

I think Zuko may get frustrated by Jet and his libido. "You're EARTH KINGDOM, dammit!"

Wheee, indexes!

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beckyh2112 October 1 2009, 21:04:36 UTC
*purrs and demands more pettings*

I think half the world knows the name, and if they don't, the guy next to them can tell them. What Zuko did was pretty infamous, one would think.

Yeah, Yui had a real fear there. *cuddles her* And Jet does and sexing is.

Jet is probably a terrible influence on Hitozi.

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dark_puck October 1 2009, 21:11:54 UTC
*strokes and skritches behind the ears*

Yyyyeah, just a bit. The twins are out of the loop, but they're not that out of it.

But she was fast enough to get herself and Hitozi under cover, and hell -- she was very obviously trying to protect Zuko's son. That should put her in his... well, if not his good books, at least not his bad books.

Jet and Yui are basically perfect for each other. :D Highly sexed, perfectly willing to one-night stand with very few questions asked ("What's your name?" seems a pretty important question. As well as "do you have birth control?" since Yui does not want babies right now.)

He probably is.

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floranna November 30 2009, 10:37:57 UTC
Oh wow. Are there more in this verse? Cuz this is AWESOME!!

And for some reason I have defriended you. Must fix that.

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