AI8 fic: Colliding with Reality, Part 4b: The First Time Ever I...

[dark_orion]

Series Title: Colliding with Reality
Title: The First Time Ever I... (Part 2)
Author: dark_orion
Pairing: Kradam
Rating: NC-17
Summary: That abruptly reminds Kris there had been a reason for wanting to get Adam back to the mansion, to have him alone, and that reason is still burning up Kris’ agenda.

Author's Notes: Yay, Part B! Time for the sexin'! And

Comments

[gumbogirl_mn]

Glorious!

[___polyethylene]

Oh. Oh. I absolutely adore everything about this. A small detail, in particular, that stands out as so fantastic to me is the sense of fate and destiny that pops up every now and again, the idea that this is okay because "Kris and Adam have been heading this direction almost from the moment they met-longer, for all Kris knows..."

I can't even begin to explain how much of an asset you are to this fandom.

[faerielissa]

That Bible translation sounds like it might possibly be from a modernized adaptation - I know that there's at least one version in circulation. I'm not sure, as I've never actually read one, but that's what the change of wording suggests.

Anyway. This? Is brilliant. I know I haven't commented before, but this is one of my two favorite series fics in this fandom, mostly because it's so very deep and amazingly well plotted out, as well as well-written. The characterizations are spot-on, and I've found myself going back to read it over and over again.

Wonderful, wonderful work.

[n_e_m_i]

-INCREDIBLE FANGIRL SQQUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEE!-

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this story, this update, for writing and posting and being so far beyond awesome I don't think I'll ever be able to read another Kradam fic unless you've written it. This is simply beyond words, beautiful, fantastic, sweet, no description can possibly be good enough. Magnificently done!

In case you hadn't guessed yet, I love this (obsessively, addictively, hopelessly). Never stop writing. :) <3

[n_e_m_i]

Oh, and thanks again. My comment and your story gave me some inspiration for a new poem! Yay! :D

[altrus01]

Excellent! Will there be more?