Flyboys Flametastic Fanfiction Entry: angst: "Souvenirs You Never Lose"

[dark_orion]

Title: Souvenirs You Never Lose
Author: dark_orion
Rating: G
Summary: Sometimes Michael wishes that David had died in the accident.
Warnings, Disclaimer, etc: Yo, lawyer type people! TOTALLY NOT MINE. Also, I've done bad things to David. I know, I know, I'm awful.
Authors Notes: Now for the polar opposite to my other entry!

Comments

[emo_bangs]

That was beautifully tragic! I must say, THAT first line is a great way to reel someone into a fanfiction. I read it and was like 'Shit, I gotta read the rest like NOW!" And the ending, just about killed me. Absolutely brilliant! Wonderful job! <333

[martinha_15]

Dear God the Angst !

I'm crying so much right now, you don't even wanna know

Beautifull story sweetie <3

[micheleeeex]

Oh, that was beautifully written!

Fantastic job!!!!

[cherazz]

*sobs hysterically and latches onto you

Most beautiful thing ever!

[anonymous]

Oh my gosh I was crying so hard! When David was watching Michael play and he mimicked it and said pretty, that was the most beautiful part ever!