Fic and fanmix, part deux

[dark_orion]

Because the multi-post is becoming a habit:

Title: What Would Happen
Author: dark_orion
Rating: PG, for boykissing
Pairing: Michael/David
Summary:
Forbidden fruit,
Ring on my finger…
You’re such a moral, moral man.
Would you throw it away, no question?
Will I pretend I’m innocent?
What would happen if we kissed?
Warnings, Disclaimers, etc: There is nothing

Comments

[cherrymaryberry]

You totally win for using Christian Kane's LA song! I love that song, he has such a wonderful voice.

Lovely fic!

=D

[bionic]

asjkfjfdifejiefjk!!!!

THIS WAS SO PERFECT.

Oh god. And to end with that Brooks & Dunn song. PERFECT. The ending was so perfect. And this fic was just so good. The songs were perfect for them. And I love that Meredith Brooks song, you are so right, it is beautiful and haunting and so them.

I can't really form coherent sentences. Sorry! Just know that I loved this times infinity.

[matertenebrarum]

My heart just exploded and gushed bleeding love all over this story.

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I never wanted it to end. I kept looking at the scroll bar to the side of the window watching it get closer and closer to the bottom and thinking, "NOOOOOO!!!" And then there was a part 2 and I was like "HELL YAAAAAAAA!!!" And then I had the same scroll bar feeling as this part came to an end. But, man it ended so brilliantly. And I love you even harder for giving us a "one year later" bit.

FAVED!

[brainzz_insanee]

YOU WIN!!!

You should feel accomplished!!! This was amazing, and definitely in my top 5 (maybe in 3) for favorite Mavid stories. Your description, how you capture them, the songs you pick, how you start each interlude... Awesome! I can't stop gushing!!! Just beautiful!!

(“But…the things I feel for you, what you make me feel…it’s like nothing I’ve ever experienced before, and… I shouldn’t want you…but I do. God, I want you.” Michael’s voice broke at the end, and he reached out with the hand not gripping David’s to slide his fingers across the other man’s jaw, slipping them into David’s hair as he turned the other man’s head so that Michael could look into his eyes. “I love you.”)
---One of the best confession scenes I've read.. so powerful & oh so good!! I could almost hear Michael's voice catch and see both of their eyes shining.

[cherazz]

^^Couldn't agree more on what you said about this part! It truly was the best confession of love scenes I've ever read...so powerful and so breathtaking. I too could hear Michael's breath catch and the elation they both felt thereafter.

[cherazz]

Oh my goodness!!!! *stands up and applauds* You are so damn good at writing them! It's a gift! I am in tears right now...I loved this so so much. Never have I found someone who captures not only a scene perfectly, but the characters and their personalities, thoughts, and emotions...I am just so drawn to this...I keep going back and tearing up all over again.

Them making love, how David thought about his song choices, how his breath caught when Michael whispered to him...*melts* So lovely! <3