Fic and fanmix, part deux

[dark_orion]

Because the multi-post is becoming a habit:

Title: What Would Happen
Author: dark_orion
Rating: PG, for boykissing
Pairing: Michael/David
Summary:
Forbidden fruit,
Ring on my finger…
You’re such a moral, moral man.
Would you throw it away, no question?
Will I pretend I’m innocent?
What would happen if we kissed?
Warnings, Disclaimers, etc: There is nothing

Comments

[cherazz]

Oh my goodness!!!! *stands up and applauds* You are so damn good at writing them! It's a gift! I am in tears right now...I loved this so so much. Never have I found someone who captures not only a scene perfectly, but the characters and their personalities, thoughts, and emotions...I am just so drawn to this...I keep going back and tearing up all over again.

Them making love, how David thought about his song choices, how his breath caught when Michael whispered to him...*melts* So lovely! <3

My favorite line though, is when Michael is talking to Stacey. You couldn't have done it more perfectly than how you did...

"Michael nodded, and he could see the beginnings of a victorious smile on Stacy’s lips. Raising his head, he looked deeply into her large blue eyes and said, “I want a divorce.”" --- beautifully done and so well executed! The victorious smile was all mine when I read this =D

Beautiful beautiful job hun! *big hug* I am so anxious to catch up on "Lest Ye..." now. Real life has been very hectic and stressful...it makes for something wonderful to come back to. You FTW!