FIc: White Collar, BtVS, Better Off Ted

[daria234]

A White Collar fic here, and links to other fics at the bottom.

Title:3 Times Peter Thinks that Neal Understands Why Crime Is Wrong, and 3 Times Peter Knows Neal Doesn't. (Part I)
Fandom: White Collar
Characters: Peter and Neal, could be gen or preslash
Note: This is the first part; the first half of the title. (It's all I have written now)

Comments

[damietta]

Nicely done. These really drew me in and I was invested in each of them. I especially liked the nursing home one as we have seen that Neal really does have a soft heart I can see him being torn up by listening to the elderly woman.

I can also see Mozzie trying to help Neal, but also staying very loyal once the decision was made to continue "the life".

Can't wait for Part 2! (If you haven't already, you should cross-post to the whitecollarfic communities!)

[daria234]

Thanks so much!

I agree that Neal on the show is a softie (but in the best way).

And I will be so upset if the show ever tries to make Mozzie less than loyal!

[jrosemary]

Excellent start--I love seeing Neal through Peter's eyes, and I love the way Peter manages to be stern and forgiving at the same time. Hurry with Part 2!

[daria234]

Thanks! Stern but forgiving is the perfect Peter description :)

[photoash]

OMG O_O THIS IS EVEN MORE AMAZING THAN I THOUGHT IT'D BE!!! :D :D :D

How you showed Neal over time, in the car with Peter, then when he was first working with the WC unit and now after Kate and everything else. Neal trying to give another con a chance -- and Neal knowing the guy wouldn't take it but him doing it anyway!

The discussion of what Moz tried to do for him :) *heartbreaking* :D Just everything here was amazing and emotionally intense!

You are such an amazing writer :) seriously! I love the whole thing and can't wait to see what happens next!!

[daria234]

:) Thanks! Thanks for encouraging me to write it too - it made me feel like it wasn't such a dumb idea. :)

I really think that Moz would never show his "crime isn't all it's cracked up to be" side to Peter, EVER, and even though I think Peter is Mr. Smartypants, I don't think he would really see beyond that, so I think he would be very disbelieving that Moz tried to help in such a Suit-y way.

Your comment is so sweet - thanks :D

[daria234]

Thanks :D

[ext_186374]

I am so loving this! I adore how you write, and how you write them.<3 <3

[daria234]

:) Thanks so much - your comments are always really encouraging :)