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THE RULES

Sep 01, 2006 22:49

Title: The Rules
Written By: sydneyalexis
Timeline: Post 513/future fic
Rating: PG [coarse language]
Summary: The Liberty Gang take it upon themselves to teach Gus to 'just say no'…sort of.
Author Notes: Many thanks go out to shadownyc for the beta!

( The Rules )

Comments 124

sian265 September 1 2006, 13:52:10 UTC

You nailed it! Couldn't have been better fic that captured the gang's voices!

sydneyalexis September 10 2006, 23:51:28 UTC

Thank you! :D

And now for the all important question: did you know it was me? LOL!

sian265 September 11 2006, 02:21:19 UTC

I kind of did, I had a feeling it was, the voices we're to dead on!

_kiden September 1 2006, 15:18:26 UTC

"Wait. When was Ted not pathetic?"

I laughed so loud at that, my entire office got quiet and awkward.
XD fantastic!

sydneyalexis September 10 2006, 23:54:00 UTC

I laughed so loud at that, my entire office got quiet and awkward.

Reading fan fic at work? That's so...what I would do.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the fic!

asm614 September 1 2006, 15:23:18 UTC

Your description of Michael and Ben is so spot on! Hehehe.
(as was everyone else too) :)

Thanks!

sydneyalexis September 10 2006, 23:55:15 UTC

I tried to include all canon pairings. I think the only person I left off (*cough* intentionally *cough*) was Blake.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the fic. Thank you for the feedback!

suzvoy September 1 2006, 15:48:29 UTC

"Yeah…and then I might have to sponge off of my best friends' kid's college fund," he interjected with a teasing smile.

OUCH! Definitely his father's son ;)

sydneyalexis September 10 2006, 23:56:31 UTC

*snickers*

He's half Kinney. Of course he's going to mention something horribly uncomfortable to leave the room as quickly as possible (and thus avoid boring conversations).

Thank you for the FB!

beathen September 1 2006, 16:52:25 UTC

I loved seeing everybody's perspectives in such a quick, but accurate way. The last line totally proves that Gus is Brian's son. Great job!

sydneyalexis September 10 2006, 23:58:53 UTC

...a quick, but accurate way

I had a history professor that said that everything you write should be like a woman's dress -- long enough to cover the topic but short enough to be interesting.

While it might be an offensive saying, it is, none the less, accurate. I try to keep the BS in my writing to a minimum, tell the story, and get out.

Thank you for the FB!