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danistormborn

endings and beginnings

Nov 20, 2006 11:34

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junewilliams7 November 21 2006, 04:54:56 UTC

Don't want to be a stalker, but ... ahem ... epilogue, please!! Even if there is a sequel later, an epilogue closes loose ends and sets things up for the sequel. Loose ends such as: how everyone reacted to her actions or if she kept her identity secret, what the press coverage said, does she have a trial for murder or "vigilante justice," do S&H ever let the public know that Lucius, etc. are dead. (Crouch would be a big surprise - does Crouch have evil friends still alive?) There are enough folks who knew Hermione's identity who would wonder about her - Neville and his Gran, certainly. Would Severus clean up the crime scene so that nothing can be traced to Hermione? Her blood/DNA is all over the place ( ... )

danistormborn November 21 2006, 15:20:50 UTC

Look at all those questions you asked! Wow, I have a LOT of things to figure out if I'm going to go any further with the story ( ... )

junewilliams7 November 22 2006, 08:55:11 UTC

Re finding the rooms - if I remember correctly, someone can go into each person's "room" (Lucius' home office, the Lestranges' office, etc.) and pick up the thingie that enables them to enter the special hallway. I figured someone could pick up the thingie and discover the hallway, thus finding the other Death Eaters' doors. That might trigger a search, and then "Lily" was Lucius' fiancee, so the Aurors might be looking for her, and then they would question Gran Longbottom (she sponsored Lily, no?), and then Hermione might have to come out of hiding to defend Gran.... Veritaserum on Gran or Neville would force them to admit Hermione is alive. And unless Severus is also in hiding with Hermione, he too could be picked up for questioning. Well, you can tell that I'm really hoping for more of this story! Epilogue or sequel or just say the story is "not completed" and continue. Hmm, perhaps the Grim Mistress is forced to go back in action.... You could do a million things! As long as you keep writing (and don't kill off Severus or ( ... )

danistormborn November 22 2006, 19:15:41 UTC

Those are all really good points and ideas. Damn! Now the story is twisting around in my head.
Grr... I'll have to think about it some more. When I've got a plot solidified, I'll let you know. Curses! This story was supposed to be DONE.

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