I’m totally in love with this sequel & the original story. The whole pirate theme & hurt/Jared & comforting perfect/Jensen was so wonderfully written.
I enjoyed the development of Jared’s eventual real love for Jensen & the ever patient but almost-ended-up-clueless Jensen (but he was just being SO good & wanted to be SO sure not to pressure nor hurt Jared!).
I was soooo ready for them to finally consummate their relationship, but actually they haven’t exactly “completely consummated” it yet, so…………are you perhaps planning to write more of this story? I hope, I hope! I’m so in love with the characters now that I would really like to see more of them.
Thank you! I'm not really planning to write more, but I haven't ruled it out either, it just depends on if RL gives me time to write more and I have an idea. I'm glad you liked it!
I stumbled onto this story and the previous just today. It's just lovely! Your descriptions of Jared's thought process are very compelling--just pulled me right into his head!
Also, throughout both stories, I kept picturing Jensen with a big, ridiculous, feathered hat. I have no idea why. It was fun, though!
I just spent the last couple of days reading this sequel and the previous story and I must say I loved it to pieces. Your portray of how damaged Jared was (that he didn't even realize) and how Jensen slowly helped him heal was just perfect. I intnd to stak your journal in case you decide to write anything else with J2 because you simply push all my buttons!
Also, I hope you decide to come back to this story someday because I'd love to know what happened when Jared found his family, stood to his parents and maybe regain a relationship with Megan and Josh (that I don't think were too happy with what their parents did). It would be the full circle for Jared to be free!!
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I’m totally in love with this sequel & the original story. The whole pirate theme & hurt/Jared & comforting perfect/Jensen was so wonderfully written.
I enjoyed the development of Jared’s eventual real love for Jensen & the ever patient but almost-ended-up-clueless Jensen (but he was just being SO good & wanted to be SO sure not to pressure nor hurt Jared!).
I was soooo ready for them to finally consummate their relationship, but actually they haven’t exactly “completely consummated” it yet, so…………are you perhaps planning to write more of this story? I hope, I hope! I’m so in love with the characters now that I would really like to see more of them.
Great stories.
Thank you for writing!
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Also, throughout both stories, I kept picturing Jensen with a big, ridiculous, feathered hat. I have no idea why. It was fun, though!
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LOL, I have no idea what sort of hat Jensen would wear, but it would probably be just as you described :)
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Also, I hope you decide to come back to this story someday because I'd love to know what happened when Jared found his family, stood to his parents and maybe regain a relationship with Megan and Josh (that I don't think were too happy with what their parents did). It would be the full circle for Jared to be free!!
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