Comments | dangerous_mind1: OneShot - JaeHo - Wandering in the immense sea of falseness, giving your back at the infinity.

deftonsita in dangerous_mind1

OneShot - JaeHo - Wandering in the immense sea of falseness, giving your back at the infinity.

Dec 22, 2007 00:33

Wandering in the immense sea of falseness, giving your back at the infinity.
Thanks to: honesthours
"He might be gone already,
leaving empty spaces in the apartment,
he might have erased you from his memory, from his life,
but no matter what you will never be able to forget him,
he's your other half after all, you twin soul."

( Vagando en el inmenso mar de la falsedad, de espalda al infinito. )

!language: english, paring: jaejoong/yunho, *fandom: dbsk

Comments 13

chloe1910 December 22 2007, 07:55:19 UTC

wah, a really long title..but it's very apt for this fic..

no...Jae commited suicide..sob sob...

For your first time foray into Jaeho, it's no bad..though it's a death fic sob sob...

See, with your writing talent, no pairing would remain ahhh un-writable for you...nothing's impossible ne..

deftonsita December 22 2007, 08:02:11 UTC

ahaha sorry for killing Jae, really.

See, with your writing talent, no pairing would remain ahhh un-writable for you...nothing's impossible ne..
awww~! thanks! thanks!! :3!! i'm getting reading to write yours ahahaha ;D!!

kurogoma December 22 2007, 08:07:26 UTC

First time that i write a JaeHo fic. (Actually while i was making it i wasn't thinking in any paring, but i couldn't think in any other since i did't wanted to make such a tragic JaeMin.

if i write, i would probably have done the same for the same reason, i like happy JaeMin best. XD

deftonsita December 22 2007, 22:04:10 UTC

glad some one agrees with me 8D ahaha XD
and yeah, i like happy JaeMin too, a little angst once in a while won't kill anybodye but separating JaeMin because of dead, no thanks, i did that once, but i got them back together by the end of the fic :D!!!! XD

deftonsita December 22 2007, 22:04:39 UTC

and i like your icon btw X3!!

moon1084 December 22 2007, 08:09:28 UTC

OMG! u killed Jae! poor yunho! but nicely written otherwise

deftonsita December 22 2007, 22:09:57 UTC

>_>.... uh.. sorry T_T!! but while i was writing the fic i had to kill him >D

Thanks! i hope you had like it hehe

tvxqisdalove December 22 2007, 08:16:32 UTC

i didn't tell you this - but i really liked the part where you relate the cold to the numbing of his heart. it's really so .. bittersweet <3

JAEHO FTW! next time, nobody is dying, okay? :D

deftonsita December 22 2007, 22:11:41 UTC

AW! thanks! and i love how you helped me, thanks a lot dongsaeng, and sorry for leaving whitout telling you, yesterday i mean, my mom woke up and told me to turn off the computer DX

JAEMIN FTW!! ahahaha XD, ok i'll try not to kill anyone ahaha, but is soooooo tempting 8D

XDD

tvxqisdalove December 23 2007, 04:34:14 UTC

DW ABOUT IT UNNIE! *glomps*

no i is sure you love jaemin and you wants them to be together, yes so prz not to kill anybody in jaemin ficc :D

try a jaechun plz. BUT A SOULMATE, NOT YAOI XD

deftonsita December 23 2007, 05:49:14 UTC

what?... what!? WHAAAAAAAT!? IT CAN'T BE A SOULMATE FIC IF IS NOT A YAOI FIC!! DDD:!!!... but i'll do my best, ahahaha XD

and YES YES! I WORSHIP JAEMIN!!!

kaz_squared December 23 2007, 04:52:09 UTC

Oh dear.
*in tears*

This was so angsty. :'[ Do write more~~~
Reading the previous comments, I actually thought it was Yunho committing suicide rather than Jae. oxo; Not sure why~~~

deftonsita December 23 2007, 05:51:41 UTC

:O! *hands a tissue*

AwW~! don't be sad, is a fic, remember? xD. I'll do it, if you want me to 8D!
But noo~! it was Jae the one jumped to the river ... Dx
thanks for reading and for your comment :D!