Chase

Jul 23, 2011 19:58


Chase
Kibum/Sungmin | PG | AU/Action
835 words

feel the wind in your hair, see the lights sparkle in your eyes; do you hear my feelings for you?

“Why are you always so reckless, why do I even put up with you?” Kibum stepped on the accelerator, surging forward as he weaved between cars. )

sungmin is everything in my life, genre: au, rating: pg, fandom: super junior, m: sungmin, m: kibum

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unorderedlist July 24 2011, 04:55:09 UTC
KLSDJFKLJASDFKLJASDLF SPOOOOT!

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unorderedlist July 24 2011, 05:23:26 UTC
KIMIN AND KANGMIN MY LIFE IS NOW COMPLETE THANK YOU!! LFHSDKJFHKJASDHFJASHGKJAHGKJAHGJHFGSLDFHJKFHGKJSDFHGKJSDGKLSJDLFGKJSLDFKGJSKLDFGJKLSDGJSKLDFGJKLSGJLKDJFGKG! <3333

this is one more thing i cannot write-- ACTION.
no matter how hard i try, everything just sounds choppy and weird. but youuu! you managed to write it (GUN WIELDING SUNGMIN FTW!!) and added a little romance to it too~ how can you say that you can't write romantic things?? this was all sorts of romantically awesome!!

kldfjksfksdjhfg i caaaaannot get over that little kangmin <3333 bickering has always been equal to love for me nyahaha :333 and wheeee~ that was cute, the way min was talking back to kangin, even though we only hear one side of the conversation~ eeek, you just made my day, being a deprived kangmin fangirl and all XDDD

i love how kibum's so nonchalant about proposing, even though he's panicking inside XDDD that was so adorable and so kibum-like :DDDD

i loooved this~ write mooooar prz! <333

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mylonelysmile July 24 2011, 07:00:27 UTC
me!!
kimin, waow idk veryyy rare min pairing that i've read?
i thought kangin is the one in the relationship with sungmin!!
but clearly stated kimin lol
duhh so sweet kibum proposing
and i totally smiled too on the part kibum smiled and thinking that those action movie scene exist in real life xD

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dandanfung July 24 2011, 18:42:13 UTC
kimin is super rare i agreeee~

haha no, kangmin are like, bickering friends that like to bug each other to death.

kibum is sweet okay, he just doesn't know how to show it sometimes

thanks for reading~

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gween_taiyou July 24 2011, 09:48:33 UTC
kibum, that ass, he puts up with sungmin bc he lubs him :3

the kangmin interaction made me go ALSKFGSGAJSLJ because i feel like sungmin really can get away with doing that, being informal to kangin and giving him cute nicknames and shit, irl. that was so adorable and it made me realize how much i miss them together.

eee, the kimin was really cute, too ;3; kibum can pretend to be a douchey badass all he wants, but he turns into an stuttering mess of a fool when it comes to sungmin, sort of.

ah, i love how we have the same otps. da gud lyfe 4 me, man.

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dandanfung July 24 2011, 18:40:32 UTC
kibum is such an adorable guy i love him okay

kangmin, you have no idea how badly i miss writing kangmin, and yes, sungmin would get away with anything when it comes to him because they have the hugest soft spot ever for each other

kibum isnt douchey, he's just not talkative and he doesn't know what to say man, cut the adorable boy some slack, okay?

lmfao, otps FTW

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paradigm_twist July 24 2011, 15:20:56 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHA at Kangin ruining the moment. Why can't anyone cut Kimin a break and interrupt them later? xD I want that bad-ass Sungmin. Break down all that subdued outer and set the inner devil free :D

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dandanfung July 24 2011, 18:31:50 UTC
hehehehehe, well kangin was there to save them, but yeah~

badass sungmin! you should write him more like that~ go do itttt =3

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^^ efeje July 28 2011, 18:35:29 UTC
it was been quite a long time ago since i read an action fanfic , you are good with any genre , a good writer i must say ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Aishh this Raccoon really ruined the best scene ... i'm still waiting for Bummie finished this sentence “S-Sungmin, will you -” and a reply from Min , but what a good timing indeed lol

adding another 1 ff for this rare pairing ~

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Re: ^^ dandanfung August 9 2011, 22:56:03 UTC
i really think it's the first time i've tried written action plot, and no, this sucks pretty bad because I ended up getting mushy again...

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