[Hierarchies] 2/?

Apr 12, 2010 17:18


Title: Hierarchies
Chapter: [2/?]
Genre: AncientKorea!AU, drama, angst, eventual romance
Rating: PG-13 (mentions of torture)
Pairings: SiHan, more to come
Characters: Sungmin, Kyuhyun, Zhoumi, Ryeowook, Donghae, Henry. [Featuring: Siwon, Hankyung, Leeteuk]
Summary: Status hierarchy determines your placement in society. From the food you eat to the ( Read more... )

hierarchies, length: chaptered, sjm

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imhappi April 15 2010, 23:18:02 UTC
loveee this story...=w=~
plz update soon! :)

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dandanfung April 16 2010, 03:15:17 UTC
Thanks for reading. And I will update, I have chapter3 on my personal journal already, haha (:

Ch 4 is in the making.

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imhappi April 26 2010, 02:47:14 UTC
yayy thanks so much :D

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miangel_zezchic April 16 2010, 02:12:35 UTC
The build up is real slow and I somewhat love it cuz it keeps me on edge as I read through each chapters. You captured the essence of slavery really well. How, despite Sungmin showing favortism for Ryeowook and Donghae, their treatment is no better than any other slave. They're still placed at a lower status than the princes. And I blame Kyu for being the stuck-up prince he is (I hope Mimi is able to change that...someday...soon? XD He has yet to really meet Mimi, right?).

There's a lot of unanswered questions I'd really like answered...but I guess I have to be patient...

XD

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dandanfung April 16 2010, 03:17:44 UTC
Kakakak I love your comment. I'm trying hard to make it slower so readers feel for my characters.

And it means a lot to know that people appreciate my take on slavery (I thought it might offend some people).

You said pretty much all the things I wanted to hear, so I'm happy and I'm probably going to write more of chapter 4 now.

I'm intrigued as to your questions, because I've been dropping hints here and there about certain things. It'll be nice if I get to see what my readers are thinking as they read through it.

<33333 Comments like this make me smile. Thank you!! <3

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ai_sumairu April 16 2010, 04:31:01 UTC
So it's Mimi they saved. But yes, what about Henry and Hannie. Even if it's Siwon, he's clearly acting like monster. I want them saved and in good hands. ;_;

Kyu is such a brat! >.< And Minnie... Awwwww... What a kind heart he has...

Hae... ;_; You're hurt!!!! How and why? Wookie... ;_; You're more than a servant. You are yourself. You're a human being too. ;_;

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dandanfung April 16 2010, 04:34:25 UTC
Keep reading and you'll see what happens (PS. ch 3 is up but i didnt post to miracle yet)

Kyu will change, and Min is kind, almost too kind...

Hae's foot will be illustrated later on, and Wook understands that, he's the first dynamic character that experiences a change, I think.

Thanks for reading <3

BTW. Loving that KiSung icon <3

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ai_sumairu April 18 2010, 02:21:03 UTC
LOL! Yeah well... KiSung is part of my life now and forever. :D

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dandanfung April 18 2010, 03:56:36 UTC
It's okaayyy *huggles* (btw. chappie 3/4 are up on my journal, cuz they wont be going on miracle yet)

Keep reading, there's more drama and I truly believe that people will like Kyu in the long run.

<3

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dandanfung April 18 2010, 03:57:14 UTC
Thank you for reading~

Yeah, Kyumin brotherly dynamics is a blast to write <3

(ps. ch3/4 are updated on my journal, just not on miracle yet <3)

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