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dandanfung

[Hierarchies] 2/?

Apr 12, 2010 17:18

Title: Hierarchies
Chapter: [2/?]
Genre: AncientKorea!AU, drama, angst, eventual romance
Rating: PG-13 (mentions of torture)
Pairings: SiHan, more to come
Characters: Sungmin, Kyuhyun, Zhoumi, Ryeowook, Donghae, Henry. [Featuring: Siwon, Hankyung, Leeteuk]
Summary: Status hierarchy determines your placement in society. From the food you eat to the ( Read more... )

hierarchies, length: chaptered, sjm

Comments 23

vivalapaparazzi April 13 2010, 03:03:25 UTC

BOO!

vivalapaparazzi April 13 2010, 04:03:09 UTC

HAEHAE... 0_0
THIS STORY, I SWEAR.
IT INTRIGUES ME TOO MUCH.
AND OH WHAT HAPPENS TO MOCHI AND HANGENG...

>w<

dandanfung April 16 2010, 03:10:29 UTC

<3 you know how much I wuv you to bits.

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dandanfung April 16 2010, 03:11:15 UTC

I guess the concept of the hierarchies and social status isn't working out for you?

See what I have in store for them later. (:

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dandanfung April 18 2010, 03:57:54 UTC

I don't think i have character deaths in my plot, but I'm on the verge of deciding that for one, if not two, characters at the moment.

<3

akihikaru April 14 2010, 08:38:07 UTC

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD8

THEY BOUGHT HENRY TOO.. RIGHT? DDDDDDDDDDDDD8 or wrong? DX

write, nii. i like this. it is amusing. XD just no smut. XDDDDDD

Ryeowook never forgot who he was. He was a servant and no matter how well Sungmin treated him, he was still a lowly servant. He would never forget that fact, despite how much he wanted to. He was, after all, a servant.

THAT PART MAKES ME WANT TO PAT WOOK. DX

dandanfung April 16 2010, 03:12:18 UTC

WRONG. :DDDDDDDDDDD

Wook starts changing soon, he isn't nearly as static as before. He's actually one of the first few dynamic characters of the whole piece.

<3 you

plastikxteukie April 15 2010, 20:02:05 UTC

*confused* i thought there was just two boys in the shack?
poor donghae~ >.<
and OMO!! *lights pitchfork* what did he do to Henry??!!??!!
loves <3

dandanfung April 16 2010, 03:13:48 UTC

What are you confused about? There were three boys, HanZhouRy, the italics are a flashback/dream that Mi had when he was sleeping.

Donghae didn't do anything to Henry... D:

Thanks for reading. (:

plastikxteukie April 16 2010, 09:59:14 UTC

no i mean in the first chapter it sounded like there was tree people as in HanRy or ZhouRy + Master
and i wasn't talking about Hae...i meant the "You held Henry tighter, because the bastard wanted him and his timid personality tonight. His drunken mutters illuminated the fact that it turned him on having his small lips against his cock." moment

sorry, my comments make no sense ^^"
<3

dandanfung April 16 2010, 10:04:32 UTC

I can clarify this bit.

The first chapter, the three people refers to Hankyung and ZhouRy. Hankyunh was holding onto Henry while Siwon was beating up Zhoumi until he was unconscious, and Min bought him.

As for this chapter, the flashback, it was Zhoumi hugging onto Henry as they watched Siwon.. umm have his way with Hankyung. Siwon wanted Henry, but Hankyung threw himself in, sort of protecting ZhouRy.

Hope this helps!! (PS. chappie 3/4 is up on my journal)

followurdestiny April 15 2010, 21:41:23 UTC

oohh Geng, Henry and Mimi TT__TT
... I don't like hierarchies...
They don't mean a thing when it comes to a person's heart or life...
Liking this though... :) looking forward to more!

dandanfung April 16 2010, 03:14:39 UTC

Exactly. I'm glad you're understanding my whole reasoning for the story. Hierarchies and social status shouldn't be a reason as to how people live their life.

Thank you. <3