prompt: Mortar

Jan 03, 2014 23:44

Stopping, she noticed the loose bricks, the mortar between them crumbling. The bricks were easily wiggled at her touch, so she one pulled out. Crumbly mortar became dust and three more fell out with it. She peered through the hole made in this wall along the street. This wall that was attached to nothing, which was some small remnant of a building ( Read more... )

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lacombe January 7 2014, 02:01:55 UTC
I think there's a part of me that thinks this is going to happen every time I visit an abandoned building. I'm completely enthralled with abandoned places, and am always taking pictures.

Cool story -- maybe it's me, but it definitely got my attention. :-) Thanks for writing!

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haasiophis January 9 2014, 07:11:57 UTC
Makes me think of a bit of The Dark Tower a little.
Very cool.

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