Comments | danang1970: FIC: A Friendly Chat (humour, fluff, mild crack)

danang1970

FIC: A Friendly Chat (humour, fluff, mild crack)

May 29, 2011 13:39

TITLE: A Friendly Chat
RATING: PG
FANDOM: A-Team movieverse
GENRE: Humour, slight crack
WARNINGS: Slight slash (F/M), language
SUMMARY: Hannibal calls Face and Murdock into his office for a chat. Unfortunately for them, they don't run screaming when they have the chance.

( A Friendly Chat (1/1) )

face/murdock, fanfic, crack, murdock, face, fluff, a-team, slash

Comments 18

maelyn_rey May 29 2011, 04:06:30 UTC

*gobsmacked*

What? You can't leave it there! What do they do when they leave Hannibal's office? Huh? *must know*

Lol. This was awesome. I love Hannibal's technique and everything. But, seriously, more, please?

danang1970 May 29 2011, 04:39:40 UTC

:P Yeah, I suck a bit. This was meant to be a tiny little fluff piece, but a sequel may well happen soon. Glad you liked it, even if I ended it in a bad fashion.

maelyn_rey May 29 2011, 05:00:25 UTC

Tease is what you did, but it's still awesome. A sequel would be so much win I can't even tell you. I'll beg.

*gets on knees* Pretty please with chocolate-covered Face and Murdock?

sonora_coneja May 29 2011, 04:24:49 UTC

this. is. hilarious.

I love the confusion, Hannibal forcing the issue...just awesome!

Me IRL --> XD

danang1970 May 29 2011, 04:40:04 UTC

:D So happy you liked it. Fluffy crack is so much fun to write.

hao_lin May 29 2011, 11:04:23 UTC

So great. I giggled through the whole thing. Hannibal knows his boys. Better than they know themselves. Don't hide your love!

purrslink May 30 2011, 05:19:22 UTC

Bwhahahahaha! I absolutely love this - how he locks the door behind them and THEN they realize something's wrong. The slight voice of horror through all of this is what totally makes it. And Hannibal goading Face? I laughed so hard, because really, there is no better way to get to Face than question his 'skills'. Absolutely lovely, as always! And that last kiss? HOT. SO VERY HOT.

I think we need a sequel. :D Wonderful, brilliantly wonderful!

danang1970 May 30 2011, 05:39:47 UTC

Ah, thank you! This was one of those cracky ones that's just way too much fun to write. :D I'm pondering the idea of a sequel. If I can pull it off without getting too angsty or strange, it'll definitely happen! Thanks again for your feedback. :)

purrslink May 30 2011, 05:52:35 UTC

I love your crack. Consider me a regular user who continues to come back for a fix. ONLY THE FINEST CRACK FOR ME. *twitches! I can stop when I want!*

And yay, sequel pondering! \o/ I'm just saying, I would read it even if it was angsty AND weird. Though, haha, I could almost see Hannibal's plan backfiring in the sense that things get MORE awkward between the two. Instead of them deciding to talk it out, they decide to spend the time doing the manliest things they can to make up for it. Then, BA finally gets tired of yet another extremely forced "I saw the biggest pair of boobs today and it was awesome" conversation (and tired of Murdock taking to hanging out with him) and conveniently loses the key to the garage. While Murdock and Face are in there. Or something equally straight forward. Though there are really a million ways this could go, all of them wonderful. I do hope you do one! :D

danang1970 May 30 2011, 05:58:06 UTC

:D You are the best prompter ever. Okay, that's it, a sequel is so getting written. The thought of BA having to put up with Murdock more than usual is just too much fun to ignore. :D

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sharkgloves May 31 2011, 12:47:02 UTC

Ahahaha! Hannibal, you magnificent bastard! I have really missed your hilarious fills and this is absolutely marvelous and adorable - I love Face and Murdock's growing horror as they realise that Hannibal has cornered them for one of his chats (Hannibal giving the boys embarrassing dad!talks always fills me with an unholy glee) and I cracked up at Murdock moving slowly in case Hannibal's vision is based on movement like a T-Rex. Awesome! :D