Comments | damagereport: Fic: Thnks fr the Knckrs - Joe/Patrick

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Fic: Thnks fr the Knckrs - Joe/Patrick - R (2/2)

Feb 17, 2009 05:41

joe/patrick, long fic, thnks fr th knckrs, bandom, chaptered, challenge

Comments 38

klashfor February 17 2009, 13:57:53 UTC

I really like this, Patrick's confusion about how to react was really well done.
The general awkwardness between them when they tried to be together was great as well. Very tense.
I liked it :)

rosiedoes February 17 2009, 15:56:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it - this fic was a nightmare to write.

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rosiedoes February 17 2009, 19:44:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

ribbonsonwrists February 17 2009, 16:27:50 UTC

told you it'd turn out great!

i love the dudely awkwardness, and how patrick doesn't wanna get involved with it because of his own mental squish about "girl's" clothing.

i really love how it turned out, amorcita. ♥

rosiedoes February 17 2009, 16:30:33 UTC

Thanks, hon. Almost all the stuff you helped me with ended up getting cut in the re-write, but you were awesome.

cheshire_cat94 February 17 2009, 21:45:58 UTC

Nnngh. Hot and awesome :D

rosiedoes February 17 2009, 21:46:41 UTC

Thank you. :D

likethepaint February 17 2009, 22:33:26 UTC

I loved this dude. I'm glad you didn't give up and settle for the first version, because as much as I know pushing on with this one sucked for you, it was so worth it. And adding that last little bit of awkward dialouge really made that last scene work without feeling quite so simple.

I am genuingly never going to be able to look at them without wondering now though... ahaha.

rosiedoes February 18 2009, 00:02:11 UTC

Hahaha. Thanks, hon. You know they have loyalty cards.

desireem81 February 18 2009, 01:03:00 UTC

Okay, so give one second to fangirl over this thing and then I'll write a real comment.

AKLdjsdlkfjasdf Holy Crap dude. You should not have the ability to make something as awkward and childish be that hot!! Okay, done now.

I really liked the beginning part with Dirty and Jeanae, especially Dirty's dialogue. I liked that Patrick wouldn't undress around her.

The whole panty thing was done in the best way possible with Patrick's complete reluctance and than his not so much reluctancy and Joe's surprise at where it all went. The messenger conversation was nicely done and had me cracking up the whole time.

And the panties are ridiculously girly in the worst possible way. XD

rosiedoes February 18 2009, 01:18:21 UTC

Hahaha - they are such silly kids.

I am really pleased you liked it, though - thank you!