This is so great! I had to go and look at the community you linked to appreciate it in all its glory, because I'd never even heard about the panties-throwing thing, but man, this story is fantastic :D All Fall Out Boy stories should be Joe/Patrick, I think. Awesome.
Dude, this was awesome. I love how awkward it was. And I love how Patrick tried to cover his body when he was on the bed, everyone who writes sex scenes with him and he never cares and I'm wondering why he isnt trying to cover up. So thank you! Seriously, this was amazing though! you had me busting up laughing (and my family looking at me like I was crazy) and I was blushing and I was ready to cry when they were at Petes! Women, you are seriously talented at this and now I know why my sister is always talking about you. lol Once again, thank you.
Thanks, hon, I'm really glad you liked it. I always make a point of trying to think about the little details, like Patrick being embarrassed about being naked and that sort of thing.
Thank you for reading - if you want to read more Patroh, check out the catalogue on the sidebar for all the others. ♥
Big wow! If there would be any award, you totally should win it. I love all this awkwardness and uneasiness between them, how their kink wasn't there from the beginning but they needed to discover it slowly. And spelling mistakes in messenger talks, it looked very real. <3 Mems =]
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I loved this.
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Thank you for reading. ♥
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I love how awkward it was.
And I love how Patrick tried to cover his body when he was on the bed, everyone who writes sex scenes with him and he never cares and I'm wondering why he isnt trying to cover up. So thank you!
Seriously, this was amazing though! you had me busting up laughing (and my family looking at me like I was crazy) and I was blushing and I was ready to cry when they were at Petes!
Women, you are seriously talented at this and now I know why my sister is always talking about you. lol
Once again, thank you.
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Thank you for reading - if you want to read more Patroh, check out the catalogue on the sidebar for all the others. ♥
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If there would be any award, you totally should win it.
I love all this awkwardness and uneasiness between them, how their kink wasn't there from the beginning but they needed to discover it slowly. And spelling mistakes in messenger talks, it looked very real.
<3
Mems =]
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